Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I'm not sure if he's real, or dead and one of the baddies trying to stop her finding things. It seems weird that he should just turn up when there was no alarm, and Jack had sorted everthing out. But something must happen, she can't be late back! Where the heck is Jack!!?? Excellent again, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024

Actually, Michael was there only because Jack insists that they patrol the Judge's old office every night in memory of his friend. He thought it was a waste of time, but his adrenalin kicked in when he found Sandra. His first bust! things are beginning to roll and the fireworks begin!
Smiles, Carol

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

So, Jack isn't available, but where's Patrick. Sandra is in a world of hurt right now. I can't wait so see how she gets out of this. Plus, Patrick needs to back at the mansion, very soon.

"Drive around the block and enter through the alley. Drive around the block and enter through the alley so you won't be seen. (repeat of first sentence)

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024

Yes the ball is rolling and the fireworks are about to begin! Sandra's got to get out of jail and find Jack, but how? And where's Patrick... a ghost on the prowl after his first time in the city. Thanks for catching the repeat. I fixed it!
Smiles, Carol