Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I'm glad they were able to acomplish that feat. This story all these ghost seem to work well together going back and forth between human form and ghost from. It would be handy sometimes if we make ourselves invisible.

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 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024

thanks so much Beth...Been trying to catch up between painting my house and writing in the middle of the night. Crazy! Glad you enjoyed!
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

That was really exciting, the race to save Madeline and they did! But will William get the job done? Is he strong enough? He has those mortals to contend with, too. You have done an incredible job, Carol, this is so exciting! I'll be looking out for the next chapter! Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024

Still got a few more tricks up my sleeve so I am thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter. Hope it was realistic with the ghosts outsmarting the gangsters. Thanks so much as always.
Smiles, hugs, and love, Carol