Aiona's Poems
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Comment from Begin Again
One of the many milestones of growing up and reaching adulthood. In our family, the tears ceased as soon as they discovered that the "tooth fairy" would bring them money.... but I was surprised to learn that what was once a few pieces of change had grown in Dollar signs. Change happens!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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One of the many milestones of growing up and reaching adulthood. In our family, the tears ceased as soon as they discovered that the "tooth fairy" would bring them money.... but I was surprised to learn that what was once a few pieces of change had grown in Dollar signs. Change happens!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your review, Carol. Yup, my child is nonverbal, so I wasn't able to do the tooth fairy story with her. But it helped with my other two children! LOL!
Comment from jessizero
This was such a sweet and creative take on the three line poem addressed to a loved one. You got the syllable count and subject matter right, and the poem was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This was such a sweet and creative take on the three line poem addressed to a loved one. You got the syllable count and subject matter right, and the poem was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your review, jessizero.
Comment from Shanbreen
Well said Aiona ---" The enamel of milk teeth is not as durable as that of permanent teeth. So many metaphors with life." Some people place the fallen tooth under their pillow (used to?) for the good fairy to bring them luck. In my case, a long time ago, I went around showing the tooth to enhance my macho image which was badly lacking. =)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Well said Aiona ---" The enamel of milk teeth is not as durable as that of permanent teeth. So many metaphors with life." Some people place the fallen tooth under their pillow (used to?) for the good fairy to bring them luck. In my case, a long time ago, I went around showing the tooth to enhance my macho image which was badly lacking. =)
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your review, Shanbreen. Yup, the tooth fairy story worked well with consoling my other two children, but the youngest is nonverbal. So even this poem didn't help console her. It took about 3-4 KitKats and lots of hugs for the tears to stop. LOL!
Comment from Nicki.B
Ah this is such good advice for the little ones. They get so upset over losing their first tooth, God love them. But then they discover another will grow in its place! Another milestone of growing up. Well done
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Ah this is such good advice for the little ones. They get so upset over losing their first tooth, God love them. But then they discover another will grow in its place! Another milestone of growing up. Well done
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your review, Nicki.B.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written 3 line poem and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I wish you the best in the contest as well may you have a wonderful day and may God bless your weekend. But you
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This is a very nicely written 3 line poem and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I wish you the best in the contest as well may you have a wonderful day and may God bless your weekend. But you
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your review, patcelaw. I hope you have a good weekend also.