Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Chapter 13 C"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
29 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
Finally!!! Okay, now we can proceed with the story without worrying about Noah's and Sami's feelings for each other. Hopefully we can get the bad guys locked up without a lot of trouble.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Finally!!! Okay, now we can proceed with the story without worrying about Noah's and Sami's feelings for each other. Hopefully we can get the bad guys locked up without a lot of trouble.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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LOL Noah and Sami will still have a couple of issues. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
That was a lot of steamy build up to the first kiss.
There is some subtle foreshadowing to the upcoming confrontation in the beginning of this chapter. I like that you are building suspense.
Easy six!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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That was a lot of steamy build up to the first kiss.
There is some subtle foreshadowing to the upcoming confrontation in the beginning of this chapter. I like that you are building suspense.
Easy six!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I had to make that kiss super special. I hope it worked.
Comment from royowen
What an unusual way of deciding if the feelings are real, I guess those things are a long way behind me, but I do remember how important physical attraction is to the young, your female heroes are always feisty, courageous, independent and sure of themselves, unless around an attractive male like Noah, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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What an unusual way of deciding if the feelings are real, I guess those things are a long way behind me, but I do remember how important physical attraction is to the young, your female heroes are always feisty, courageous, independent and sure of themselves, unless around an attractive male like Noah, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Wendy G
Well, she seems to have forgiven him - sealed with that sizzling kiss. But now they will have to be very restrained, and keep everything together intil Noah comes up with a plan to keep her safe.
Wendy
Edit: How does this effect what we're doing right now (affect)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Well, she seems to have forgiven him - sealed with that sizzling kiss. But now they will have to be very restrained, and keep everything together intil Noah comes up with a plan to keep her safe.
Wendy
Edit: How does this effect what we're doing right now (affect)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Usually, my grammar checker catches that. It didn't this time. Hmm, I appreciate the help. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
this couple has sure had it's ups and downs for just knowing each other a very short time. Frankly, I don't believe Noah didn't notice Sami's body, if it was that appealing, but perhaps he's a much better man than me. It will be interesting to see where this goes. I would think that once the fire has been started, it will be hard to hold it back. Of course its against all the rules. I only hope that Noah can keep his head in the game and keep her safe until the jerks are apprehended,
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Hello Barbara,
this couple has sure had it's ups and downs for just knowing each other a very short time. Frankly, I don't believe Noah didn't notice Sami's body, if it was that appealing, but perhaps he's a much better man than me. It will be interesting to see where this goes. I would think that once the fire has been started, it will be hard to hold it back. Of course its against all the rules. I only hope that Noah can keep his head in the game and keep her safe until the jerks are apprehended,
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I'm guessing Noah didn't want to admit to it, right now. It would've only gotten him in more trouble. LOL Noah will keep his head in the game. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
The team should have made doubly sure Sami didn't overhear when they were discussing Sami being paid for and how. She was bound to be upset, although she wouldn't have been in that position if she hadn't been over-zealous and put herself in danger. Of course, they went into details that offended her. Yes, they're going to have to come up with a plan to protect Sami. They can't keep her in custody forever. It would be best for Sami and Noah if she gets out of there as soon as possible so they can get on with normal lives. Sami is making things difficult for Noah. I don't think he's the right choice for her, but she seems to need a hero figure. Oh, my, I'm going on about them as if they were real people. judi
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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The team should have made doubly sure Sami didn't overhear when they were discussing Sami being paid for and how. She was bound to be upset, although she wouldn't have been in that position if she hadn't been over-zealous and put herself in danger. Of course, they went into details that offended her. Yes, they're going to have to come up with a plan to protect Sami. They can't keep her in custody forever. It would be best for Sami and Noah if she gets out of there as soon as possible so they can get on with normal lives. Sami is making things difficult for Noah. I don't think he's the right choice for her, but she seems to need a hero figure. Oh, my, I'm going on about them as if they were real people. judi
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I'm glad they affect you like real people. That means I did my job as a writer. I appreciate this review.
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Well, here I am, trying to give them advice. They probably wouldn't listen, anyway. judi
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LOL One never knows. Unfortunately, my novels are character driven and often argue with me. I always end writing what that want. I often don't know until it's done.
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I know what you mean. The characters do take on a life of their own. I wouldn't presume to tell Bertha what to do. judi
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I do understand. My characters wake me up between 2:30 and 3:00 to have a chat. I am not at all happy about that.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
No going back now for Noah, tempted and succumbed finally! Quite a sizzling chapter here, Barbara! Strange how, sometimes, words aren't required to resolve issues:) Nicely done and a pleasure to read! Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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No going back now for Noah, tempted and succumbed finally! Quite a sizzling chapter here, Barbara! Strange how, sometimes, words aren't required to resolve issues:) Nicely done and a pleasure to read! Debbie
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Well, Sami found a way to discover if he liked her body or really liked her and the answer was all she had hoped for. Now Noah has to figure out how to save her life without his desire for her causing him to make mistakes.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Well, Sami found a way to discover if he liked her body or really liked her and the answer was all she had hoped for. Now Noah has to figure out how to save her life without his desire for her causing him to make mistakes.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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AMEN! Noah has his work cut out for him in many situations. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
Your novel continues well. I don't know why except that i have a trivia factory in my head, but the relationship between Noah and Sami reminded me of a line from the original "King Kong". Carl Denham says of Kong that he was the king oof his world "But when he saw beauty he forgot his wisdom and the little guys got him".
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Your novel continues well. I don't know why except that i have a trivia factory in my head, but the relationship between Noah and Sami reminded me of a line from the original "King Kong". Carl Denham says of Kong that he was the king oof his world "But when he saw beauty he forgot his wisdom and the little guys got him".
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for keeping up this fine novel.
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Thank you for writing.
Comment from nomi338
This couple so needs to be allowed to become one. I do hope and yes even pray that the day will come when it will happen. I full well know that it will not be easy or without certain challenges, but it must come to pass.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This couple so needs to be allowed to become one. I do hope and yes even pray that the day will come when it will happen. I full well know that it will not be easy or without certain challenges, but it must come to pass.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I have a feeling they just might be able to work things out. LOL