Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

We are getting closer to finding the answers. I am really liking this story. This is a good write.

Sandra nodded, "Go, Madeline, run. We'll follow you." (nodded)

Will laughed, "Nice one, Sandra. Show up the guys." (laughed.)

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024

Yes, the end is approaching. Now we go on a treasure hunt and find where William hid his vast collection of stolen property. Thanks so much for reading, enjoying and for the stars. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Esther Brown

Exceptional

I feel like you are nearing the final chapter. It is fast paced, builds quickly to a climax tying everyone neatly into the action. I love the way you connected Sebastian to both settings. It is hard to switch seamlessly between two setting both so tense. Esther.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024

I think we are nearing the end as we leave the demons behind us and enter into the search for the treasure and the redemption. Thank you so much for your kindness and the stars.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

You certainly created chaos in that ballroom. I wondered if anyone would escape but i should have known you would get them out. It will smoother if the evil demon can't return but I guess we will see. The stop is the library. Your story is very intense.

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024

Thanks, Beth. I think we've left the majority of the darkness behind us and now it's the treasure hunt for redemption. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Smiles, Carol