Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Chapter 13 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
33 total reviews
Comment from Daylily
You have been developing this story beautifully and it is easy to like the main characters. A developing romance is hard to beat, as well. I like the mix of romance, danger, and mystery. It is not possible to predict what is going to happen next. The tension is building. Another well-written chapter, Barbara, with no edits noted. :-)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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You have been developing this story beautifully and it is easy to like the main characters. A developing romance is hard to beat, as well. I like the mix of romance, danger, and mystery. It is not possible to predict what is going to happen next. The tension is building. Another well-written chapter, Barbara, with no edits noted. :-)
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The porch sitting, first her dad and then Noah is an amusing part of the story making it clear she is a girl who speaks her mind. Noah seems to have given up on the idea of maintaining his distance. Sami is way to appealing for his "rules" to work.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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The porch sitting, first her dad and then Noah is an amusing part of the story making it clear she is a girl who speaks her mind. Noah seems to have given up on the idea of maintaining his distance. Sami is way to appealing for his "rules" to work.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Sami broke Noah down. He's just attempting some to remain within boundaries. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I'm getting nervous about Noah's job. I keep getting the feeling he is going to get hurt. I like how Noah and semi's relationship is developing. She acts like a little girl around noah... it's cute.
Well done, I enjoyed the chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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I'm getting nervous about Noah's job. I keep getting the feeling he is going to get hurt. I like how Noah and semi's relationship is developing. She acts like a little girl around noah... it's cute.
Well done, I enjoyed the chapter.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Noah will remain safe, but does hit trouble head on.
Comment from T B Botts
Hi Barbara,
this was an interesting chapter. I thought it was great the way Sami blurted out her feelings about the meeting with Big T. I do wonder how it will work for law enforcement to be working with one gangster, even temporarily and overlook the obvious crime that Big T is engaged in after this all goes down. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Hi Barbara,
this was an interesting chapter. I thought it was great the way Sami blurted out her feelings about the meeting with Big T. I do wonder how it will work for law enforcement to be working with one gangster, even temporarily and overlook the obvious crime that Big T is engaged in after this all goes down. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Police do it all the time undercover and make drug deals. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
Sami gets indoctrinated into the complex and risky world of police work here. You are setting the stage for a showdown somewhere ahead, as Noah's team prepares to intervene and rescue some of the girls from Chen. But I don't know if real police would be able to make a deal with a criminal like Big T. It's unethical. At the same time, Sami and Noah are continuing to cuddle up to each other, and we get that burst from here when she finds out that Noah is getting into a potentially dangerous situation. So we see her feelings getting stronger. estory
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Sami gets indoctrinated into the complex and risky world of police work here. You are setting the stage for a showdown somewhere ahead, as Noah's team prepares to intervene and rescue some of the girls from Chen. But I don't know if real police would be able to make a deal with a criminal like Big T. It's unethical. At the same time, Sami and Noah are continuing to cuddle up to each other, and we get that burst from here when she finds out that Noah is getting into a potentially dangerous situation. So we see her feelings getting stronger. estory
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Real police do it all the time undercover. They even make drug deals and do worse. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I like the spontaneity of Sami in this chapter. Her quip about rushing him at the door because she was starving. Very fun atmosphere to this chapter even though it was full of implied danger. Really am enjoying this one. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I like the spontaneity of Sami in this chapter. Her quip about rushing him at the door because she was starving. Very fun atmosphere to this chapter even though it was full of implied danger. Really am enjoying this one. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the understanding. I appreciate it.
Comment from Sankey
Sorry I missed the last chapter. It was goos. I did read it but no review. You have top score there, anyway. This was an interesting read. Getting into the thick of things.
Just one of those American things in errors. "I don't want you to[o]."
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Sorry I missed the last chapter. It was goos. I did read it but no review. You have top score there, anyway. This was an interesting read. Getting into the thick of things.
Just one of those American things in errors. "I don't want you to[o]."
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you for going back to read that chapter. I didn't have as many reviews on it as I normally do. I was starting to worry. Thank you for the kind review on this one.
Comment from Jacob1395
I could sense Sami's frustration at not being involved in the big decisions, especially when she feared that Noah might be putting himself in danger. This is another tense, fast moving chapter, Barbara. I just have one suggestion here, "There's no way, you're meeting with Big T by yourself." I think I would remove the comma before you're. An excellent chapter, looking forward to the next installment.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I could sense Sami's frustration at not being involved in the big decisions, especially when she feared that Noah might be putting himself in danger. This is another tense, fast moving chapter, Barbara. I just have one suggestion here, "There's no way, you're meeting with Big T by yourself." I think I would remove the comma before you're. An excellent chapter, looking forward to the next installment.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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You are 100% correct about that comma. Not sure how it got there. LOL I appreciate the catch. Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
I still can't quite manage to accept that they've only met less than three weeks ago. Sami is acting like a young and petulant teenager wanting to cuddle up with him, and putting her opinion in as though they were already married or had at least known each other for quite a while with an established realtionship. Noah has to be very patient with her impetuosity. Yet she's 25, and needs to accept that it's not her place to interfere. Anyway ... I am enjoying the read!
Wendy
Edit: "I don't want you too." (to)
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I still can't quite manage to accept that they've only met less than three weeks ago. Sami is acting like a young and petulant teenager wanting to cuddle up with him, and putting her opinion in as though they were already married or had at least known each other for quite a while with an established realtionship. Noah has to be very patient with her impetuosity. Yet she's 25, and needs to accept that it's not her place to interfere. Anyway ... I am enjoying the read!
Wendy
Edit: "I don't want you too." (to)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Sami has four older sisters. She is the baby. Thank you for the kind review and I made the correction. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Douglas Goff
What a fantastic chapter. It looks like they have a solid plan to engage the main bad guys and it seems realistic to me.
We shall see what occurs next week.
D
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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What a fantastic chapter. It looks like they have a solid plan to engage the main bad guys and it seems realistic to me.
We shall see what occurs next week.
D
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.