The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from BethShelby
Another book, I hope they have found something useful. In the end I'm sure things will work out. Is this story one of the more difficult ones to write. I would be having trouble keep up with all these ghosts. I'm enjoying it
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Another book, I hope they have found something useful. In the end I'm sure things will work out. Is this story one of the more difficult ones to write. I would be having trouble keep up with all these ghosts. I'm enjoying it
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Hi, Beth. Yes, this story has been the hardest thing I have ever written. Usually chapters just roll out of my mind and I type, not so with this one. I must think how my ghosts act and appear different from the mortals and where the story will go. It's untraveled paths for me. I have no idea if it's how anyone else would see the spirits, but it's how I see them and all I can do is hope that others enjoy it. Thanks so much for the comments and review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is a very well written chapter full of excitement, especially at the end. Now I can't wait to read more of it. Very good dialogue and imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Carol, This is a very well written chapter full of excitement, especially at the end. Now I can't wait to read more of it. Very good dialogue and imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Hello, Teri...Glad that you enjoyed this chapter and that I have intrigued you with what will happen next. I appreciate your comments. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
A single oil lamp burned near William's bedside. The air was heavy with the scent of dried flowers and old books. The wooden floors creaked as she hurried across the room. Outside, the distant howl of the wind intensified the haunting silence that shrouded the mansion, heightening her fear.
Esther knelt beside William, her translucent fingers trembling as they hovered above his hand. The faint glow of her form illuminated the shadows that clung to the corners of the room, casting an ethereal light on his still face.
Once again grab my attention and hold it throughout. Great job.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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A single oil lamp burned near William's bedside. The air was heavy with the scent of dried flowers and old books. The wooden floors creaked as she hurried across the room. Outside, the distant howl of the wind intensified the haunting silence that shrouded the mansion, heightening her fear.
Esther knelt beside William, her translucent fingers trembling as they hovered above his hand. The faint glow of her form illuminated the shadows that clung to the corners of the room, casting an ethereal light on his still face.
Once again grab my attention and hold it throughout. Great job.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Hello, Nicole...Thank you for spending a little of your time reading this chapter. I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. I appreciate your thoughts.
Smiles, Carol