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Comment from Dr. Nad
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Debi, thank you for sharing all this information about someone who is one of our most familiar FanStory family members. It is so phenomenal how you take both the mundane and the marvelous and tie them together in a Multi-faceted rhyming poem. Your flow is perfect from the first line to the last. Thank you again so very much sis.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Thanks Dan, I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them. Thank you so much for the awesome six stars.
    Thanks again, my dear not so younger bro! Love, Debi
reply by Dr. Nad on 09-Jun-2024
reply by Dr. Nad on 09-Jun-2024
    You are most welcome, sis.

    Sorry about the blank response. I hit the wrong button L O L.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a lovely birthday poem for Patricia. You included many things I did not yet know about her. She's an amazing woman of God, and I'm glad you remembered her special day. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Dearest Carol, you are so sweet and I think about you all the time wondering how you are doing? Thank you for the honor of the six stars.
    I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my dear friend! Love, Debi
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Happy Birthday, Patricia! I hope it's the best one yet. And thanks to you Debi, for taking time out to offer happiness on Patricia's special day. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Hey you! Good to see you again. I keep looking at my pm's and haven't seen anything from you lately. Are you taking a little break before starting new?

    I hope I don't sound nosy, because I just don't want to miss anything you write for now on. I will never forget the one story I read of yours where the plot to kill the wife backfired and I thought it to be the most genius thing I had ever read. So I am not just trying to be nice.

    But I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my dear friend! Love, Debi
reply by Ric Myworld on 09-Jun-2024
    I don't post often, Debi. I mostly read and let those I enjoy reading entertain me. :-) Thank you for the kind words.
Comment from Neonewman
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Happy Birthday, Patricia. What a grat tribute Debi has crafted for you. I love reading these birthday tribute's, gives me some insight on who this large family is.
Thank you, Debi, for all the light you share.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Hi Steve, you are so thoughtful. I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my dear friend! Love, Debi
reply by Neonewman on 09-Jun-2024
    Always a pleasure, young lady!
Comment from Jill D
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I knew Patricia was an amazing wordsmith but I didn't realise she had so many hidden talents not hidden any more thanks to you Debi.. This is fab info through poetry on a lovely lady... Good for you Debi!
Happy birthday Patricia!:)
Jill:)

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Hi Jill, yes, she is an amazing woman, isn't she?

    I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my dear friend! Love, Debi
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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What a lovely tribute to a gifted lady for her birthday. I wish I had some of the gifts she has. I cannot sew - nor knit - nor crochet, and she beats me out at great grandkids with two more than I have. Still we three are sisters in the Lord, and I wish her Happy Birthday, along with you!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Oh, but Verna, my dear Verna, you know how much I love you. And I know plenty of things you can do like your flower gardens and poetry and being a good mom and grandma. Ok, I realize you weren't comparing, but I just needed to point all that out. Oh, and thank you for the gracious six stars.

    I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my very dear friend! Hugs! Love, Debi
Comment from gansach
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What a delightful poem for Patricia's birthday. I've enjoyed reading much of her poetry and exchanging messages with her as I've gotten to know her and your poem captures the life of this wonderful and talented woman. Great job as always!
Debi, you always do such lovely tributes.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Hi there Gail, forgive me that I haven't been your way for a while, but I have had a few setbacks. I will be over to see you soon.

    I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my dear friend! Love, Debi
reply by gansach on 09-Jun-2024
    Hope all is okay with you. I haven't been doing much on FS--the grandkids had end of year finals & projects I helped with, my car died so was without transportation for awhile, just got another one Fri., dryer pooped out, too--that will have to wait. Life just gets so overwhelming sometimes. Take care! Love ya!
Comment from Jacob1395
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It's amazing that she had her story acted out on the radio. Another excellent birthday poem, Debi, I hope Patricia has a fantastic day celebrating. You've definitely captured her story and her personality really well in this piece.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Hi Jacob, I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my dear friend! Love, Debi
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Hi, Debi. This is Another Happy Birthday wish that won't go unnoticed by not only the recipient but all of us at FS who follow you and enjoy your work.

Best, JohnC


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Hey John, I know by memory that your birthday is coming up and I haven't been asking anyone who had a poem last year, but I posted something a while back and said I would love to do another,, but I needed for you to ask. So you can let me know. You know how much I enjoy doing them and not sure if I did a biological on you last year.

    I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my dear friend! Love, Debi
Comment from Sanku
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What a great tribute to patricia! She is such a remarkable person and has had a varied life and a sense of humour to boot. You are lucky to know people like her...

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Hey Santha, I missed wishing you a happy birthday when it was here so happy belated. I would have loved to do another poem for you, but I had posted and asked anyone who wanted one to let me know. I hope you had seen it. Anyway, I didn't forget it, I just didn't have a chance to tell you a happy birthday. But I hope it was happy!!

    I appreciate the very kind words for Patricia and her poem and I know she too will enjoy reading them.
    Thanks again, my dear friend! Love, Debi