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A Mysterious Inheritance and Murders

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, one thing is for sure, we never know what might have gone on before us. LOL. We just have to watch out and be ready to duck quickly to avoid the flying plates and candles. But some things are unavoidable.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-May-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
    LOL I missed the flying plates yesterday... My son buried a rake under some weeds (by accident) and I stepped out of the raised garden onto the weeds and the rake nadle flew to greet my head. Needless to say I lost my balance and fell on the pavers. Luckily I didn't fall in the pond which was only inches away. Now how does that awkward and disgusting image fit into your day.... Need some Pepto? This morning I ache in places I didn't know existed. Have yourself a great day!
    Smiles, Carol
reply by Ric Myworld on 01-Jun-2024
    I?m so sorry about your mishap, but I?m glad it wasn?t even more serious. Hope you feel better as the day goes on! 😉
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
    Never fear...It might have knocked some sense into my head. LOL It's raining today so it's computer time. Congratulations on having the highest ranked story this month with Tucker! Awesome, of course.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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Nice job here. I enjoyed reading it and it kept my attention from the beginning till the very end. I could almost feel as if I was in the story itself. Good luck with all of your work going forward.

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 Comment Written 31-May-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
    Hello, Nicole. So nice of you to stop by and read one of the chapters of my book. I appreciate your time and comments. Have a great day!
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is one interesting family, that's for sure. LOL Thank you for sharing this post with us. It gets better and better.
 
She's much like you!" Lorrie murmured, her eyes dropping (missing beginning quotation marks, "She's)

"William, calm yourself." Sebastian waited and then continued. "No one's (continued,)

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 Comment Written 31-May-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
    Thank you as always. I have fixed the errors and want to thank you for pointing them out and for enjoying the story. I truly am grateful for your support.
    Smiles, Carol