The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was amazing! Carol, please post another by Wednesday, I'm off on holiday on Thursday, very early in the morning, and I want to know what happens next and I want to give you a six. I was so happy to read Esther's son talk to her, telling her he and William always loved her. I hope they can now be together in peace, but we still have Victoria to deal with. I can't wait to read on. Well done, my very talented friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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That was amazing! Carol, please post another by Wednesday, I'm off on holiday on Thursday, very early in the morning, and I want to know what happens next and I want to give you a six. I was so happy to read Esther's son talk to her, telling her he and William always loved her. I hope they can now be together in peace, but we still have Victoria to deal with. I can't wait to read on. Well done, my very talented friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Next chapter is posted with Sandra and Victoria... I am eager to see if it deserves your praise. I think it might be a good one.... or at least I hope. LOL Thanks for reading this one and enjoying the meeting of Esther and Will. I liked the touching moments.
How long will you be gone on vacation? Hope you have fun and enjoy yourself. Relax and feel better.
Lots of smiles, hugs and love as always, Carol
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I've just read it! It was one of your best. Now I have to wait ages to read what happens next. 😭😭😭😭
We leave in the early hours of Thursday morning, and come back on the evening of the 18th of June. I'm really looking forward to it. But I'll miss you. xxxx
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You take care and have a wonderful time. Hit me up on facebook with pictures if you can. Smiles and hugs...
Love ya, Carol
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I'll try. I've just posted my last chapter until I come home. I hope you like it. xxxx
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I loved it, of course. Just finished reading...those boys can't catch a break.
Have a terrific time...
Stay safe and I love you! Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's hard enough for living people to fight the elements, but for dead people to stand up and fight, it's a miracle. Or something like that. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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It's hard enough for living people to fight the elements, but for dead people to stand up and fight, it's a miracle. Or something like that. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Are you poking fun at me and my ghosts? I have no idea what I am doing or what ghosts can do for that matter. I don't recall meeting any and I pray I don't ever have the opportunity, especially in the dark. Thanks for the review my friend and your humor of course.
Smiles, Carol
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LOL. I'm having a blast with this story. Of course, I have to be my silly self. I'm with you, in that I can't remember meeting any ghosts, and I certainly don't want to. And especially in a drafty, dark room. :-) Have a wonderful weekend!
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No dark and drafty rooms for me! It's warm enough to sit on the deck and watch the river flow by.... no ghosts invited.
Enjoy your weekend too!
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Shame we can't be sitting out there wetting a couple lines and sipping a cocktail or bottle of wine. Notice I said bottle, and not a glass. :-)
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Great idea.... It's a glass when I am alone, but let there be a friend or two and it's a party. Sounds awesome...at least in my thoughts.
Comment from BethShelby
This is good that Esther and her son has been reunited iwth William who is still alive. I the first paragraph you have "warm glow that enveloped Elizabeth as she gazed at William." Who is Elizabeth? It was Esther who was gazing at William.
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reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This is good that Esther and her son has been reunited iwth William who is still alive. I the first paragraph you have "warm glow that enveloped Elizabeth as she gazed at William." Who is Elizabeth? It was Esther who was gazing at William.
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Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Hello, Beth! Thanks for catching my error...Can't keep track of these ghosts myself at times. Fixed it! Appreciate the review and the help.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a well-written chapter. Especially the character description is well-developed, and the battle between good and evil is very well executed. kay
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reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This is a well-written chapter. Especially the character description is well-developed, and the battle between good and evil is very well executed. kay
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Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Katherine for stopping by to check out this chapter in my story. I appreciate your comments and the review.
Smiles, Carol