Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi, JLR. I hope you are well

I was not familiar with the rhyming pattern. I don't need any explanation because your poem told me.

So, humdrum fair people (means blond) get a free pass out of Hell? Nice to know. I am fairhaired and humdrum. lol.

Your poem was humorous. I loved hairbrained.

You touched my day.

Well done. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

Thank you, it pleases me this evoked a smile.

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Interesting piece. Rejected by the Devil for not being bad enough. How often does that really happen in this day and age where there is ssina nd heartbreak around every corner luring you in.

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

I have to believe in redemption, otherwise, OMG! I?d hate going through this crazy lifetime only to discover I fell short of the mark.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written poem for the club event and enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .

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 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

Patricia, thank your for your kind words.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Diablo, the devil, Satan, Lucifer appears in all sorts of different forms to us. I enjoyed reading. This is a good write.

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 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

Barbara, I truly thank you for sharing your enjoyment of this little poem.