When I met you
A 5-7-7 three line poem15 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love the artwork. The three-line poem isn't bad either. It rhymes well and sticks to the point That says, love's expectations exceed imagination upon the soul's integration.
Well said and written.
Jesse
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I love the artwork. The three-line poem isn't bad either. It rhymes well and sticks to the point That says, love's expectations exceed imagination upon the soul's integration.
Well said and written.
Jesse
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Jesse, stay well my friend****kahpot
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You too, Kym. Stay well.
Jesse
Comment from June Sargent
Well done! The rhymes make this one stand out. But the sentiments of finding one's soul mate is giggled beautifully with both the words and artwork
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Well done! The rhymes make this one stand out. But the sentiments of finding one's soul mate is giggled beautifully with both the words and artwork
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written through your land poem, and I enjoyed reading it. Your rhyming is good. Your presentation is good. Have a good day and may God bless you. Patricia .
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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This is a very nicely written through your land poem, and I enjoyed reading it. Your rhyming is good. Your presentation is good. Have a good day and may God bless you. Patricia .
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
and your three line rhyme was fine. The picture displayed resembles flower power days of free love so I suspect we are in a similar age. For me the 70's were good, the sixties better, and late fifties best.
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reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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and your three line rhyme was fine. The picture displayed resembles flower power days of free love so I suspect we are in a similar age. For me the 70's were good, the sixties better, and late fifties best.
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Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you, Tom, yes, the early years were much better, filled with a lot more happiness, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Of the eras lived the early days is what I dream more than the others.
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely romance poem! And I like how you rhymed all three lines. True love can exceed anything we imagine. And true love "integrates" both souls to become one!
loves expectation (love's)
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reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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A lovely romance poem! And I like how you rhymed all three lines. True love can exceed anything we imagine. And true love "integrates" both souls to become one!
loves expectation (love's)
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Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot