Right in the Eye
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was a fine ending to your latest book. I especially enjoyed the fact that it wasn't actually a human being who caused the death of the state trooper, but the dog! kay
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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This was a fine ending to your latest book. I especially enjoyed the fact that it wasn't actually a human being who caused the death of the state trooper, but the dog! kay
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you. I've appreciated your continued support.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congratulations! The conclusion of your story is both intense and satisfying. You do a great job tying up loose ends while leaving room for reflection on the events that transpired. The revelation of Albion's true intentions, coupled with the FBI's involvement and the subsequent resolution of the situation, makes for a powerful ending. The characters' reactions to the unfolding events are realistic and nuanced, highlighting their resilience and adaptability in the face of danger. I like the moment of levity at the end with the gas too. Great job!
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reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Congratulations! The conclusion of your story is both intense and satisfying. You do a great job tying up loose ends while leaving room for reflection on the events that transpired. The revelation of Albion's true intentions, coupled with the FBI's involvement and the subsequent resolution of the situation, makes for a powerful ending. The characters' reactions to the unfolding events are realistic and nuanced, highlighting their resilience and adaptability in the face of danger. I like the moment of levity at the end with the gas too. Great job!
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Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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