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Willing Hearts

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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Wonderful chapter, it's romantic and sweet. I'm glad Noah is softening a bit. Sami has a good effect on him. I also like the way he protected her. I never had that.

 Comment Written 13-May-2024


reply by the author on 14-May-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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This one was especially good. I am going to miss these stories when you are done. You can get free pictures from Pinterest. They have the largest selection I have ever seen. Just mention them in the author notes and they are free. Karen

 Comment Written 13-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    I will probably still post just may not on Sundays. Probably on Mondays. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-May-2024
    :-)
Comment from Teri7
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The six stars is as close as I can confirm it was a great and perfect post my friend. I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 13-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you for the wonderful encouragement.
Comment from Sanku
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Very smooth continuation.of the previous chapter. I enjoyed reading Samis
and Noah's conversation.What a jerk Marc was!
Both Noah and Sami have to be very reserved due to their official set up.

 Comment Written 13-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. Noah needs to be reserved. His job could be at stake.
Comment from Sankey
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Still great reading. I love all your work, as you know. I can't wait for Myra to be found and for Sami and Noah to get some romance. I posted today! Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 13-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Ohhhh, they are getting closer. Great chapter.

I love the writing technique you used here:

"How do I do that?"

"Talk from the heart."

"Right." Noah walked away shaking his head. How do I do that?

You are talented, my friend!
D

 Comment Written 12-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. Noah struggles with emotions. He's afraid of them. I hope that comes out.
Comment from Begin Again
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It seems as if Sami and Noah are finally working out the kinks in their relationship. There's still a few snags but they are learning to trust each other and communicate...something we all need to learn.
Hope you had a wonderful day, Barbara...
Smiles and hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 12-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. Noah and Sami have a quite a few things to work out.
Comment from lyenochka
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Awww! That's sweet! I like that Sami and Noah finally had an open conversation and that Sami opened up more about her past. I liked the banter with Sarah and seeking her advice even if Noah wanted to figure things out on his own. Great job with this part and Happy Mother's Day to you!!

 Comment Written 12-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Wendy G
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A fine chapter with a significant development of the plot re that guy who tried to intrude. His punishment will make him sorry - and his double life is now exposed as well. Noah is determined to keep professional despite Sami's frequent "half-hugs"! Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 12-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Another faultless chapter with Noah still struggling between his professional duties and his ever-growing personal attachment to Sami. I like the way he deals with Ryan, taking no nonsense and determined that his duty to keep Sami safe will not be threatened. Thanks for sharing another excellent chapter, Barbara. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 12-May-2024


reply by the author on 13-May-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.