The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another virtual six, Carol, and another amazing chapter. I feel for Sandra, (of course I would!!) At least she has the nice ghosts to help her, and now it seems that Madeline is going to help keep the treasure away from Victoria. That's super-good! But they are all wary of Victoria, and know she'll be watching and waiting. I'm loving this story!! Well done, my dear friend. I will be waiting and watching, too, but mine is for the next chapter! Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Another virtual six, Carol, and another amazing chapter. I feel for Sandra, (of course I would!!) At least she has the nice ghosts to help her, and now it seems that Madeline is going to help keep the treasure away from Victoria. That's super-good! But they are all wary of Victoria, and know she'll be watching and waiting. I'm loving this story!! Well done, my dear friend. I will be waiting and watching, too, but mine is for the next chapter! Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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I'm afraid Madeline hasn't totally been forgive and she's about to be on the hot plate again thanks to Victoria. She thinks she's wise to the world but I fear Victoria has been around longer and has more power. Holding my breath!
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
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Sounds exciting!! I'm off to bed now, so have a nice rest of your day!! 🥰xxx
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Sweet Dreams, my love.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I was beginning to wonder when we'd get back to Sandra. I'm glad we did. I do like this story.
staring blankly across the room before she continued. "It wasn't to Victoria's (continued,)
Madeline was quick to continue her skepticism. "Lorrie, you've lived in the (skepticism,)
James touched her arm, trying to assure her before he continued. "You (continued,)
James shared their reactions and then spoke to Sandra. "Excluding Billy and myself, (Sandra,)
He nodded toward the Judge, "Please, continue." (Judge.)
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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I was beginning to wonder when we'd get back to Sandra. I'm glad we did. I do like this story.
staring blankly across the room before she continued. "It wasn't to Victoria's (continued,)
Madeline was quick to continue her skepticism. "Lorrie, you've lived in the (skepticism,)
James touched her arm, trying to assure her before he continued. "You (continued,)
James shared their reactions and then spoke to Sandra. "Excluding Billy and myself, (Sandra,)
He nodded toward the Judge, "Please, continue." (Judge.)
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Every time I think I have figured it out ?no surprise?I haven't. Thank you, as always, Barbara. Madeline and Victoria are about to butt heads I fear and Sandra will be caught somewhere in between.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Sandra is accepting the ghosts a lot more eaily than Madeline. She wants to help the ghosts redeem themseves and Madeline one wants to find the treasure. i"m enjoying the story.
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Sandra is accepting the ghosts a lot more eaily than Madeline. She wants to help the ghosts redeem themseves and Madeline one wants to find the treasure. i"m enjoying the story.
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Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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I fear Madeline, regardless of how much she wishes to change, has a one rack mind and it's focused on the treasure. She doesn't believe in ghosts and finds it difficult to believe in them, even after what she's been through.... to her it's still just a nightmare.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Some revelations are occurring about the nature of the treasure and Sandra's role in the mansion. Madeline is still being dense about the existence of ghosts. Strong Catholic theology on the afterlife is apparent here. Things are beginning to be revealed for the reader!
One note:
(This is repetitive wording)
**Oh heavens**, was she Noah's wife?"
**"Oh heavens**, no!" Lorrie poured herself a cup of tea
Great chapter!
Julie
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Some revelations are occurring about the nature of the treasure and Sandra's role in the mansion. Madeline is still being dense about the existence of ghosts. Strong Catholic theology on the afterlife is apparent here. Things are beginning to be revealed for the reader!
One note:
(This is repetitive wording)
**Oh heavens**, was she Noah's wife?"
**"Oh heavens**, no!" Lorrie poured herself a cup of tea
Great chapter!
Julie
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Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Oh heavens, I did it again...LOL Thanks for catching the oops! and I shall make adjustments pronto.... Appreciate the review. This chapter is more explanation than it is exciting, but it's about to ramp up again.
Smiles, Carol