What We See
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "What We See - Chapter 41"A wrongly accused teacher reinvents his life
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Only one more? sniffle sniffle. You are a fairly prolific writer and so when reviewing one for one I rarely have to troll for stories to read. But take a break between stories. Write a children's story or cute animal story to cleanse the palate.I can't wait for the one! Karen
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Only one more? sniffle sniffle. You are a fairly prolific writer and so when reviewing one for one I rarely have to troll for stories to read. But take a break between stories. Write a children's story or cute animal story to cleanse the palate.I can't wait for the one! Karen
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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That's what I always do after posting a novel (this is the fourth one I've posted). Essays, short stories, perhaps a poem or two before getting into a new novel.
Thanks for your great support and kind words, Karen. They mean a lot.
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Great minds and all that. Karen
Comment from tfawcus
That feeling of relief when a loved on returns from a dangerous place - so well told here. It is perhaps the truest test of love. This has been a well-told tale, Jim, and thoroughly enjoyed.
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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That feeling of relief when a loved on returns from a dangerous place - so well told here. It is perhaps the truest test of love. This has been a well-told tale, Jim, and thoroughly enjoyed.
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thanks very much, Tony, for your kind words. Perhaps not the most realistic of stories, but hopefully entertaining. We'll get to see how everything turns out with the epilogue on Friday.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an excellent way to tell the family, the whole truth, but manage to get a believable laugh out of it. Your characters really trust and love each other, which always makes for a good story.
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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This is an excellent way to tell the family, the whole truth, but manage to get a believable laugh out of it. Your characters really trust and love each other, which always makes for a good story.
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thank you so much, Carol, for your perceptive review and for the 6 stars. Two years before, Alan didn't have any of that, and look where he is today. His life is certainly much richer now for having his family to support him.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Aw
This is sweet reading love and hugs, kisses and smiles which is
Nice but I await a subterfuge ending of
Blood
And guts
And a
Hospital stayð?« ð??¦ð?«¨ð?«¤ð??¶ð?«¤ð??¶
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Aw
This is sweet reading love and hugs, kisses and smiles which is
Nice but I await a subterfuge ending of
Blood
And guts
And a
Hospital stayð?« ð??¦ð?«¨ð?«¤ð??¶ð?«¤ð??¶
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Oh, this will be a major disappointment then. You might as well skip reading the epilogue on Friday. The only hospital stay will be by Ginnie because she works there : )
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Never. Sometimes I write whatever is needed to make the required 150 characters. You now I luv you bro'
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I know that, and luv you too. Ooo, this is getting weird now!
Comment from jmdg1954
Alan is a smart man when he decided to be truthful to his wife on the events of getting the hard drive back.
It was well written and realistic.
Jeez, only one chapter to go?
Good work, Jim.
John
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Alan is a smart man when he decided to be truthful to his wife on the events of getting the hard drive back.
It was well written and realistic.
Jeez, only one chapter to go?
Good work, Jim.
John
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thanks so much, John. Yeah, I think he made the right move by telling all. Besides, now they think he's a macho man.
Comment from eliz100
This is a beautiful chapter. I like happy endings, and you could do that. I do not see any room for improvement. I look for ward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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This is a beautiful chapter. I like happy endings, and you could do that. I do not see any room for improvement. I look for ward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
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Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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So glad you enjoyed it, Lee. Thanks very much.
Comment from lancellot
It looks like things are wrapping up, and I'm sure Alan will get a good deal on his inventions in the final chapter.
Alan has his family, love, kids, career, redemption and soon wealth. In the end, everything a man could want.
Good work.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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It looks like things are wrapping up, and I'm sure Alan will get a good deal on his inventions in the final chapter.
Alan has his family, love, kids, career, redemption and soon wealth. In the end, everything a man could want.
Good work.
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Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thanks, Lance. I'm happy you stuck with it and provided me with the good feedback you did. It helped along the way to improve the story. Just the epilogue to wrap everything up and see how people fare during the next several years.