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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Valerie and Reggie 1950 UK"1950s UK brother and sister rivalry
31 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
As a brother who lost a sister I loved much more than I ever let her know. This wonderful heart warming story really touched me in my softest place. My sister and I had our share of battles, we were both very stubborn, never giving a quarter. Then all of a sudden she got married and had three children which softened her considerably. She then three things for me that were so generous that I could not find the words to express my gratitude. I published my first book in an effort to give her something that she would not refuse. Sadly she passed away just weeks before the book was published. My regret is palpable, but there is nothing I can do.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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As a brother who lost a sister I loved much more than I ever let her know. This wonderful heart warming story really touched me in my softest place. My sister and I had our share of battles, we were both very stubborn, never giving a quarter. Then all of a sudden she got married and had three children which softened her considerably. She then three things for me that were so generous that I could not find the words to express my gratitude. I published my first book in an effort to give her something that she would not refuse. Sadly she passed away just weeks before the book was published. My regret is palpable, but there is nothing I can do.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Most of us who have lost a sibling feel that way. I lost my youngest brother last November, and although I told him daily that I loved him, sometimes it sounded... I can't find the word. But I did love him very much and miss him terribly. So I do understand exactly how you feel, and I am so sorry for your loss. We both believe we will be reunited one day, that is what we must cling to, that day will come in God's time, not ours. I might even hazzard a guess that your sister has read your book.
Thank you so much for reading my story, I'm so pleased you liked it. You are a dear soul, my friend. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
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I am also sorry for your loss.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You're head always in gear, even when you don't think it is. You're one of those special personalities that just makes me smile and enjoy everything you write. I hope you swat those blahs away. Thanks for sharing. :-)
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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You're head always in gear, even when you don't think it is. You're one of those special personalities that just makes me smile and enjoy everything you write. I hope you swat those blahs away. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Aw, you say the sweetest things, Ric. Thank you so much for reading this one, I love reading your reviews, they are the ones that make my head swell! LOL. Thank you for awarding it one of you special sixes, my friend. You're the best! Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent story. I'll this happened to you. I'm so sorry to hear you aren't feeling well. My appendix burst too, and so did my daughters. We all had close calls. I hope you soo feel like writing again. I glad you posted this.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent story. I'll this happened to you. I'm so sorry to hear you aren't feeling well. My appendix burst too, and so did my daughters. We all had close calls. I hope you soo feel like writing again. I glad you posted this.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hi Beth, thank you for reading this one and for your love kind comments. This is totally fiction, but I had acute appendicitis in Spain when I was living there. It did nearly kill me, so I knew roughly how to write that part. Having your appendix burst must have been really painful. I'm glad you and your daughters survived it. Thank you again, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from estory
I think it's a great story of how this young man learns not to take his sister for granted. You constructed it well, with the cavalier, romping attitude of the children going to pick winkles suddenly dropping into this life and death moment. The desperation in the little boy's voice as he realizes the danger for his sister, and how much he really loves her, comes through loud and clear here. And you have that sigh of relief kind of ending. The colloquialisms in the language of the kids makes them come alive, full of personality and character. It makes them seem real and that we are there with them as this moment unfolds. estory
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I think it's a great story of how this young man learns not to take his sister for granted. You constructed it well, with the cavalier, romping attitude of the children going to pick winkles suddenly dropping into this life and death moment. The desperation in the little boy's voice as he realizes the danger for his sister, and how much he really loves her, comes through loud and clear here. And you have that sigh of relief kind of ending. The colloquialisms in the language of the kids makes them come alive, full of personality and character. It makes them seem real and that we are there with them as this moment unfolds. estory
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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What a lovely review, dear estory! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one with Valerie and Reggie. That you think I showed the desperation and fear in Reggie's voice is such a nice compliment. The sixth star is the cherry on top of your amazing words. Thank you, dear friend. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, are you okay? Now you have me a bit worried. Please do reassure me.
I'm sorry I have no six to give you, but this is a beautiful ending to the story. I hope you will be back soon with the giraffe stories. A big hug, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hi Sandra, are you okay? Now you have me a bit worried. Please do reassure me.
I'm sorry I have no six to give you, but this is a beautiful ending to the story. I hope you will be back soon with the giraffe stories. A big hug, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Ulla. The sixes don't bother me, it's the words that count. I'm having problems with my breathing still and will be back at the hospital again tomorrow. I have to say they are really looking after me, even phoning to check on me. I didn't realise how ill I was during December and January, and I've not fully recovered all this time after. It gets me down at times, and I don't feel like doing anything, which I must try to get out of. Sorry to have worried you, but I will get there in time. Thanks for reading this one. Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
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Sandra, thank you for coming back to me. Of course I worry about you. I'm so sorry you're still struggling, but I'm glad to hear the hospital is looking out for you. I know you have a will of iron. I'm right behind you and thinking about you. Lots of love and hugs, Ulla xxx
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Thank you, my dear friend. xxxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
You did a great job with this chapter, Sandra. You captured the characters' emotions very well. The best part was the love that Reggie was showing for his sister. Even his father was impressed. She was very lucky that people acted right away and called an ambulance. They were also lucky that the doctor knew right away what the problem was and acted accordingly.
Everyone was deeply concerned, and even the doctor said it was going to be touch and go. Reggie took it upon himself to go to the hospital and the doctor allowed him to spend time with Valerie. He was very patient and knew the best thing was to keep talking so that she would respond.
Eventually it worked, and she even had a sense of humor as she asked her brother to write down all the nice things he had said. He was very patient with her and seemed to know what to do in letting her know to just take a small sip of water. A good ending to the chapter, as well. A great job, my friend.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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You did a great job with this chapter, Sandra. You captured the characters' emotions very well. The best part was the love that Reggie was showing for his sister. Even his father was impressed. She was very lucky that people acted right away and called an ambulance. They were also lucky that the doctor knew right away what the problem was and acted accordingly.
Everyone was deeply concerned, and even the doctor said it was going to be touch and go. Reggie took it upon himself to go to the hospital and the doctor allowed him to spend time with Valerie. He was very patient and knew the best thing was to keep talking so that she would respond.
Eventually it worked, and she even had a sense of humor as she asked her brother to write down all the nice things he had said. He was very patient with her and seemed to know what to do in letting her know to just take a small sip of water. A good ending to the chapter, as well. A great job, my friend.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much for this detailed, lovely review, dear Pam. I'm glad you enjoyed it. In a strange way, Valerie feels she did get her revenge, but even she wouldn't have wanted to do it that way. Thank you for the sixth star, dear friend. I really appreciate both. Love you lots. Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome for the stars and review, Sandra. I appreciate your reply, and I agree with you about Valerie. It will be interesting to see the dynamic between brother and sister after this.
Comment from Sanku
Wonderful ,Sandra. I loved the way ReggiePrayed to Go, warning him that Val would create disruption in Heaven .I smiled as well as my eyes grew wet. This was so so sweet...
i loved the entire story ,every sentence of it...Love and Hugs.Santha.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Wonderful ,Sandra. I loved the way ReggiePrayed to Go, warning him that Val would create disruption in Heaven .I smiled as well as my eyes grew wet. This was so so sweet...
i loved the entire story ,every sentence of it...Love and Hugs.Santha.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much, Santha, for all your lovely comments. You have made my day, in fact, you've made my whole year!!
Everyone seems to have enjoyed Reggie's prayer, which I'm really pleased about, I thought I might get a few niggles about it. Thank you, my dear friend. And a big hugs for the golden star! Love and hugs coming back to you. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's sweet. Brothers and sisters may fight, but when it gets right down to it, they love each other. But I'd bet that later she'll tease him and he'll deny everything.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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That's sweet. Brothers and sisters may fight, but when it gets right down to it, they love each other. But I'd bet that later she'll tease him and he'll deny everything.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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That is exactly right, Cindy. Thank you so much for this lovely review, and your kind comments. I'm deligheted you enjoyed it! Warmest hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Teri7
Sandra, This is a very good chapter you have penned. I was hoping she would be alright too. You used great dialogue, but I don't see how you can use that kind of dialogue. Great job as always! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Sandra, This is a very good chapter you have penned. I was hoping she would be alright too. You used great dialogue, but I don't see how you can use that kind of dialogue. Great job as always! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Teri, for reading this one. I pulled out much of this from personal experience, not with my brother, but with a school friend who died from a burst appendix. He was only ten.
I wasn't sure what you meant by: ...but I don't see how you can use that kind of dialogue... Anyway, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from tfawcus
Just marvellous, Sandra. I have to confess it brought a tear to my eye! So authentic in every way. I'm in awe.
Many parts I could pick out, but this struck me for its underlying emotional intensity: The fear in her eyes was a small reflection of the fear she felt inside.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Just marvellous, Sandra. I have to confess it brought a tear to my eye! So authentic in every way. I'm in awe.
Many parts I could pick out, but this struck me for its underlying emotional intensity: The fear in her eyes was a small reflection of the fear she felt inside.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Hi Tony, thank you so much for this fabulous review. That you enjoyed it so much, has given me such a buzz. And thank you for the sixth star! That was so kind of you. Warmest hugs, my friend. Sandra xx