Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cherry blossoms and bird songs
d r o w n e d
by city sounds...
as laughter treads water
echoing with the waves...

cool comparisons
a great tanka
smooth flow
and nice imagery and presentation

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley.

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem and presentation. The strong authentic words paired with vivid colors makes thus a pleasure to review. We'll done.

Best wishes

Alexan


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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, Alexan

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 20-Apr-2024

You're very welcome. :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

It's a shame when the city noise blocks out the beauty of nature. I enjoyed your poem, especially the skylarks' love songs. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Thank you very much,
Jessi

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