New Beginnings
A matter of looking forward, not back30 total reviews
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
A lovely take on the two line poem. Both your internal and ending rhymes flow effortlessly carrying a beautiful sentiment.
I wish you luck in the contest.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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A lovely take on the two line poem. Both your internal and ending rhymes flow effortlessly carrying a beautiful sentiment.
I wish you luck in the contest.
Thank you.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much, Shirley! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
We can remain broken or we can become like the sun and make a new dawn for ourselves going forward. I enjoyed your two line poem, it's written with the emotions of someone who knows. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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We can remain broken or we can become like the sun and make a new dawn for ourselves going forward. I enjoyed your two line poem, it's written with the emotions of someone who knows. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much, Valda! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
Comment from royowen
What an excellent post you've written Yvette, among many good ones I've seen dear girl, you deserve to be heard in this competition with this worthy work, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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What an excellent post you've written Yvette, among many good ones I've seen dear girl, you deserve to be heard in this competition with this worthy work, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much, Roy! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
Comment from kahpot
So many lives have been broken for so many different reasons, and for those we do pray that life does offer them something better, an excellent message and two-line poem, love your rhyme words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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So many lives have been broken for so many different reasons, and for those we do pray that life does offer them something better, an excellent message and two-line poem, love your rhyme words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much, my lady! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautiful inspiring image with that light shining through and your accompanying upbeat and well crafted verse, inspired by faith, make this a very worthy entry for the contest. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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A beautiful inspiring image with that light shining through and your accompanying upbeat and well crafted verse, inspired by faith, make this a very worthy entry for the contest. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much, Debbie! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
Comment from gansach
This is a very lovely two-line poem with a wonderful and uplifting message. The accompanying picture complements the poem. A nice entry for the competition. Best Wishes!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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This is a very lovely two-line poem with a wonderful and uplifting message. The accompanying picture complements the poem. A nice entry for the competition. Best Wishes!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm moved by the inspiration your creative two line poem provides. With faith in God, and determination, we can overcome challenges and shine.
I'm glad to read your work. I remember you as one of the seven writers who reviewed my very first post on FanStory. I've missed you. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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I'm moved by the inspiration your creative two line poem provides. With faith in God, and determination, we can overcome challenges and shine.
I'm glad to read your work. I remember you as one of the seven writers who reviewed my very first post on FanStory. I've missed you. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much, LJ -- have missed y'all as well! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
Comment from Sally Law
This is just what I needed today. The last of my five brothers passed on Monday. Thank goodness I have my faith. I don't know how folks do it without God in their life. Beautifully written and illustrated in two line poetry, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest. Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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This is just what I needed today. The last of my five brothers passed on Monday. Thank goodness I have my faith. I don't know how folks do it without God in their life. Beautifully written and illustrated in two line poetry, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest. Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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So sorry to hear about your brother, Lady Sal.... but hold on to those Promises always!!
And thanx so much for your review! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! Great job with your essence poem with rhymes broken/token and shining/divining. And you've packed a spiritual message into this as God's guidance shines through when we need Him most. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Amen! Great job with your essence poem with rhymes broken/token and shining/divining. And you've packed a spiritual message into this as God's guidance shines through when we need Him most. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much, my lady! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
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Yvette! Good to hear from you! No worries - about the delay. I have been so busy since moving and we are more active in church and our community so finding time for FS is hard. Take your time and hope you can reconnect with all your old buddies here. Robyn has disappeared after April so I hope you see her in person now and then!
Comment from June Sargent
So true. Regrets can hold us back. We need to look forward through the windshield and not backwards at the rear view mirror. Dawn of a new day - embrace it.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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So true. Regrets can hold us back. We need to look forward through the windshield and not backwards at the rear view mirror. Dawn of a new day - embrace it.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanx so much, June! Apologies for the delay, but life has definitely happened in my neck of the woods and I'm just finding a bit of a footing here... Hopefully, things will be more consistent 'round the new homestead! Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :-) :-)
