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The Followup to Chasing the Elusive Dream

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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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I'm sorry, but I had to laugh when I read that they threw a a smoldering towel into the garbage. Of course, this could have been very serious, but it sounds comical because that's what young girls would mindlessly do. Toss it, and it becomes someone else's problem.

I laughed out loud when Christi asked the cop to jump her, lol! Probably why he wanted to date her!

I'm reading a lot of "family" stories this morning and they are all so entertaining! Of course, I'm familiar with your family by now, and I'm always amazed at the "interesting experiences" your children gave to you:-)

Nicely told, Beth.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Don't ever be sorry when you laugh. You know I love it went people laugh at what I write. I wish I had more amusing stuff to write about. Thats so mush for the great review and especially the six stars.
    Beth
Comment from Begin Again
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Living the Exclusive Dream, (Elusive)??

As always, your stories about family and children bring back so many hair raising memories of mine. I guess we both are lucky that we have made it through the "younger" years and still have most of our faculties with us. LOL
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you Carol, I always appreciate your review and I know you understand what mother go through with their children. I'm glad you picked up on my spags and pointed them out.
    Beth
reply by Begin Again on 14-Apr-2024
    Nothing major that's for sure...I do much worse lately. I think I am losing some of the gray matter for sure. Do youthink I could blame it on the children? Probably more like old age! LOL
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Teenagers can be difficult and these days parents can go to prison for what your teenagers do in the US. Thankfully this was not too serious, although burning your house down would have been a tragedy Beth. Thank you for sharing these difficult years with us, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you Dolly. She wasn't trying to burn it down. Just being a stupid Kid and throwing a smoking towel she'd had over a lamp into her closet. It worked out without about being a tragedy. Just another bump in the road.
Comment from Wendy G
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I always enjoy the stories of your family life. Everyone is so very normal as are the issues you faced as parents. Many thanks for sharing this well-written story.
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you Wendy. I think you knew a lot more about raising kids than I did but I appreciate you saying our family sounds normal.
    Beth
Comment from Teri7
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Beth, I always love to read the chapters about your life. You always use very good descriptive words and very good dialogue. I look forward to the next chapter my friend! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
    Thank you Teri, I really appreciate all your reviews. I hope you have a wonderful day tomorrow. God bless you.
    Beth
Comment from patcelaw
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And this is a very well written story and I enjoyed listening to it. It moves along in a nice face and it reads well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a good Sunday. Patricia .

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you Patricia. I'm so glad you liked it. I hope you have a wonderful day.
    Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Sounds like your children were about like everyone else's. Finding enough trouble to always keep you busy trying to keep up. But if it's any consolation, just be glad I wasn't one of them, because I would have driven you completely crazy. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
    I think my kids did a pretty good job of doing that anyway. I doubt if you could have been much worse. LOL Thanks for the review.
    Beth