The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh Carol, I'm so glad you are continuing this story, this chapter was amazing, I loved it. It has all the mystery this type of book wants. She has now met a ghost in the little house, and she will soon discover that those imposters are in fact the real deal, only dead! But her worst problem is Madeline. Of course she murdered her husband, but it has backfired. I can't wait to read on, my friend. Loved this!! Well done, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Oh Carol, I'm so glad you are continuing this story, this chapter was amazing, I loved it. It has all the mystery this type of book wants. She has now met a ghost in the little house, and she will soon discover that those imposters are in fact the real deal, only dead! But her worst problem is Madeline. Of course she murdered her husband, but it has backfired. I can't wait to read on, my friend. Loved this!! Well done, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you...thank you...thank you. Sandra you made my day! I tried all day yesterday to get the story going again and I just couldn't find the vibe...then this morning, I struggled but it did finally come to me. Knowing my favorite person found it to be entertaining puts me in a good spot. Can't tell you how much this means to me.
You are the best, my friend.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Honestly, Carol, this is going to be another winner for you. You must think about publishing. Leave your mark on the world. I have!! Not that any realise it!! 😂🤣😭😭LOLxxx
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I do want to publish and I've been reading about it, but I haven't grasped it all yet. I am sure many realise you and your writing. Now family..other than Matt..I doubt it. Thank you again for all your encouragement.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Wow, you kept me on the edge of my chair while reading this chapter. You are a master of suspence. I enjoyed every word and look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Wow, you kept me on the edge of my chair while reading this chapter. You are a master of suspence. I enjoyed every word and look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Oh April...I am thrilled! I had a difficult time yesterday trying to get back into the mold of writing about these ghosts but today it seemed to flow better. I thank you for enjoying it. You made me smile for sure.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
It was good to have another chapter to read and this was an exciting one. It. I"m can't wait to find out who the man in the cottage was. It seems that James an Lorrie know all about everything hut at least thay see to be looking out for her and concernedf for her safety.
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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It was good to have another chapter to read and this was an exciting one. It. I"m can't wait to find out who the man in the cottage was. It seems that James an Lorrie know all about everything hut at least thay see to be looking out for her and concernedf for her safety.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Sandra is filled with questions and the stranger in the carriage house will raise many more questions for her. James wants to get on with things, but Madeline is throwing a wrench into the mix.
Smiles, Carol