Two Colors
Two lambs make a discovery17 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
When writing for children you always need a picture. Pinterest, Google, Bing, Shutter, and others will let you use their pictures for free if you mention them in your author's notes. Good writing. Karen
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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When writing for children you always need a picture. Pinterest, Google, Bing, Shutter, and others will let you use their pictures for free if you mention them in your author's notes. Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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I was just telling another writer that I simply could not figure out how to upload the drawing from my photos! Duh
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I have been here 8 months and I am still learning the site.
:-)
Comment from karenina
I agree and this is a very pleasant poem, easy to read out loud (because I did)--and with a most important message!
As a grandmom to three beautiful mixed race children I see their hearts and spirits...
Some do not, sadly.
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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I agree and this is a very pleasant poem, easy to read out loud (because I did)--and with a most important message!
As a grandmom to three beautiful mixed race children I see their hearts and spirits...
Some do not, sadly.
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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I love what you said and how you feel? thank you and bless you.
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Blessings to you as well...
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a charming entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem contest. Love the lesson it teaches. You did a good job fixing the problem with the text colors. I am adjusting your rating. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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What a charming entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem contest. Love the lesson it teaches. You did a good job fixing the problem with the text colors. I am adjusting your rating. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I am embarrassed that I thought I had chosen entirely different colors. Thank you so very much for reading it!
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I really think this is a great poem that has a great message. I did have to enlarge it a lot to see it, because of the dark background and light font. I really liked this though, and is a great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I really think this is a great poem that has a great message. I did have to enlarge it a lot to see it, because of the dark background and light font. I really liked this though, and is a great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kindness, but I thought I had chosen totally different colors! Duh. I am grateful for your comments and am so glad you read it ?blessings
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I agree with your notes color shouldn't matter but in this case, I might have to make an exception. The black background is great but I can't even make out the white foreground font due to the bleakness of the lettering. I suggest you change the background to another dark color that helps the lettering stand out more.
Just a suggestion. Otherwise, it is nice so far as I can tell.
Jesse
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I agree with your notes color shouldn't matter but in this case, I might have to make an exception. The black background is great but I can't even make out the white foreground font due to the bleakness of the lettering. I suggest you change the background to another dark color that helps the lettering stand out more.
Just a suggestion. Otherwise, it is nice so far as I can tell.
Jesse
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Oh Jesse, I am so embarrassed. I thought I had chosen completely different colors? I?m glad you read it and told me of your trouble. Thank you!
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Glad I could help.
Comment from royowen
I'm sorry, I'm sure your poem's a good one, and if I could possibly read it I would give you a review, I don't whether you've viewed it online but it needs a lighter colour, white would be good, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I'm sorry, I'm sure your poem's a good one, and if I could possibly read it I would give you a review, I don't whether you've viewed it online but it needs a lighter colour, white would be good, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Oh Roy?.Duh! I had to leave and thought I had chosen completely different colors! Bless you for reading it! And thank you!
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Bless you
Comment from kahpot
Excellent message here for everyone, if I may suggest, brighten your font color as this is very hard to read, (even with glasses) this poem will really relate to children, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Excellent message here for everyone, if I may suggest, brighten your font color as this is very hard to read, (even with glasses) this poem will really relate to children, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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You are so very kind, and I thank you! I had to leave and thought I had chosen completely different colors?. Bless you!