Right in the Eye
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Comment from royowen
So although Slim got himself caught, the cop let him go, not loving the feds at all, so he managed to liaise with Mary even though they did pretty cleverly, with Slim pretty sure the feds were around the place. He's got enough to hide out now, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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So although Slim got himself caught, the cop let him go, not loving the feds at all, so he managed to liaise with Mary even though they did pretty cleverly, with Slim pretty sure the feds were around the place. He's got enough to hide out now, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I guess there aren't and more readily made accommodations than a pup tent, sleeping bag, and maybe a Coleman stove. Unless maybe it's a branch be made up high enough to keep ants out of your ears. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Well, I guess there aren't and more readily made accommodations than a pup tent, sleeping bag, and maybe a Coleman stove. Unless maybe it's a branch be made up high enough to keep ants out of your ears. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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smiley face here
Thank you!