2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The goldfinch is gregarious during the nonbreeding season when it is often found in large flocks. The social arrangement tends towards the male in the nonbreeding season. Beautiful bird.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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The goldfinch is gregarious during the nonbreeding season when it is often found in large flocks. The social arrangement tends towards the male in the nonbreeding season. Beautiful bird.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Rosemary.
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Comment from royowen
I like this, really such a great image, a finch which is a miniscule little bird, balancing on a sunbeam when an atom or a molecule would probably do, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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I like this, really such a great image, a finch which is a miniscule little bird, balancing on a sunbeam when an atom or a molecule would probably do, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
Love it! I particularly loved " balances on a sunbeam". And that little goldfinch looks like he bathed himself with sunshine. You chose beautiful pictures as always!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Love it! I particularly loved " balances on a sunbeam". And that little goldfinch looks like he bathed himself with sunshine. You chose beautiful pictures as always!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Heather Knight
Just one line and you've managed to make it beautiful. The colours are perfect, the words have a special harmony and it's great that you've placed the sentence between the two pictures.
Spectacular.x
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Just one line and you've managed to make it beautiful. The colours are perfect, the words have a special harmony and it's great that you've placed the sentence between the two pictures.
Spectacular.x
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Gracias, guapa, espero que Estes bien.
Besitos y abrazos
Marival
Comment from jessizero
I am impressed that you created this poem in just one line. It's definitely poetry, not just a feeling or a sentence. I liked your use of "sunbeam." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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I am impressed that you created this poem in just one line. It's definitely poetry, not just a feeling or a sentence. I liked your use of "sunbeam." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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