Right in the Eye
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Comment from nomi338
I love it. Justice must be served, Stupidity pays worthless dividends. This is a case study in the stupidity of blind greed. Malicious, murderous greed led to the death of two deserving of death. I daresay they will not be missed nor mourned. Great write. I look forward to the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I love it. Justice must be served, Stupidity pays worthless dividends. This is a case study in the stupidity of blind greed. Malicious, murderous greed led to the death of two deserving of death. I daresay they will not be missed nor mourned. Great write. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you.
Yup, stupid is, as stupid does.
Slim, saved by Ben, is in for quite a life.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Well greed has a prize named death, and the good man has an Angel, guardian Angel called Ben. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Well greed has a prize named death, and the good man has an Angel, guardian Angel called Ben. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your very kind review.