Angels of Snow
Winter wing prints26 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this in-depth 5-7-5 as children make these marks on the snow and hope to fly into the future, a fine presentation for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed this in-depth 5-7-5 as children make these marks on the snow and hope to fly into the future, a fine presentation for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a very nice poem. Very nice picture of a snow Angel. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this writing prompt. Each line connects well with the next. Nice job.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This is a very nice poem. Very nice picture of a snow Angel. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this writing prompt. Each line connects well with the next. Nice job.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
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You are welcome.
Comment from tfawcus
I like the implication that as children grow, so too is their developing ability to spread their wings and soar into adulthood and their individual place in the world.
You have used a charming childhood game to illustrate the point.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I like the implication that as children grow, so too is their developing ability to spread their wings and soar into adulthood and their individual place in the world.
You have used a charming childhood game to illustrate the point.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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:) Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from karenina
A pristine thought that bears the truth!
Angels dwell among us...
Your image confirms it...
Surely their imprint in the snow is a reminder we are never alone!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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A pristine thought that bears the truth!
Angels dwell among us...
Your image confirms it...
Surely their imprint in the snow is a reminder we are never alone!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you, as always, Karenina!! Xo
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Loved this...
You're welcome!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written ode to winter. I Love your photo. I remember making angels in the snow as a child. I loved it. It was a nice memory. Good luck in the contest. Hope you do well.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This is a beautifully written ode to winter. I Love your photo. I remember making angels in the snow as a child. I loved it. It was a nice memory. Good luck in the contest. Hope you do well.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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:) Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from LJbutterfly
Those beautiful snow angels that appear each winter on lawns and backyards across America, grow larger and larger as delighted children grow. You chose the perfect representative of a winter scene and expressed it in vivid imagery. Your chosen picture pairs perfectly and intensifies your message. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Those beautiful snow angels that appear each winter on lawns and backyards across America, grow larger and larger as delighted children grow. You chose the perfect representative of a winter scene and expressed it in vivid imagery. Your chosen picture pairs perfectly and intensifies your message. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you, my friend!
Xo
Comment from jim vecchio
This made me wish I was a kid again, having fun in the snow! In my case, the angels not only got bigger, but wider. Hope this wings its way to a win for you!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This made me wish I was a kid again, having fun in the snow! In my case, the angels not only got bigger, but wider. Hope this wings its way to a win for you!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Hahaha Jim!! Thank you so much!
Xo
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Please have q safe and healthy weekend!
Comment from Heather Bagley
I love how much this expresses for such a short poem! It almost makes me feel like it's told from the perspective of a mother, watching her children, and therefore, their snow angels, grow winter after winter.
~Heather
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I love how much this expresses for such a short poem! It almost makes me feel like it's told from the perspective of a mother, watching her children, and therefore, their snow angels, grow winter after winter.
~Heather
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, heather!
Xo
Comment from jessizero
This was a good winter 5-7-5 poem. You got the syllable count right, and I liked the sentiment of wings stretching. Your formatting of the text gave it that "angelic" feel. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This was a good winter 5-7-5 poem. You got the syllable count right, and I liked the sentiment of wings stretching. Your formatting of the text gave it that "angelic" feel. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from SimianSavant
This may be a hard entry to beat in the contest, touching a universal observation shared by parents and grandparents towards snow angels. Simple and effective with a good picture and font, this works well without overdoing it, blending symbolism with the realism of growing up.
Regards,
Harambe (for President)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This may be a hard entry to beat in the contest, touching a universal observation shared by parents and grandparents towards snow angels. Simple and effective with a good picture and font, this works well without overdoing it, blending symbolism with the realism of growing up.
Regards,
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
