The beauty of Spring.
Beauty is all around us.47 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
well Mr. BB nice artwork, words provide a a nice reflection of the artwork. A larger font might be appropriate as the graphic's size may appear overpowering. Comments from the peanut gallery.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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well Mr. BB nice artwork, words provide a a nice reflection of the artwork. A larger font might be appropriate as the graphic's size may appear overpowering. Comments from the peanut gallery.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from jmdg1954
This is a thought provoking 5-7-5...
Nature teases me
modeling her loveliness,
captive in her arms.
Hmph... Mother Nature modeling...
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 contest,
John
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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This is a thought provoking 5-7-5...
Nature teases me
modeling her loveliness,
captive in her arms.
Hmph... Mother Nature modeling...
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 contest,
John
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Yes, thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from gramalot8
Beautiful poetry. Love the photo you attached. Spring id definitely teasing us right now. One day springy weather, the next wintry. Wintry here in Utah today. Hope spring comes back real soon. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Beautiful poetry. Love the photo you attached. Spring id definitely teasing us right now. One day springy weather, the next wintry. Wintry here in Utah today. Hope spring comes back real soon. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Lisasview
Hi there Baltimore Born,
As the day winds down your lively poem is my last read for the day.
Love the image you chose as it is perfect.
Lisasview now in Soain
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Hi there Baltimore Born,
As the day winds down your lively poem is my last read for the day.
Love the image you chose as it is perfect.
Lisasview now in Soain
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from karenina
Nature is a tease! 58 degrees yesterday, back to mid 30's today...
How I long for crocus, robin, bunnies and buds on the trees!
Your 5-7-5 speaks to my heart!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Nature is a tease! 58 degrees yesterday, back to mid 30's today...
How I long for crocus, robin, bunnies and buds on the trees!
Your 5-7-5 speaks to my heart!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
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My pleasure!
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You're welcome! I woke up this morning to thirty feet of siding on the lawn. High (March) winds last night...what a mess!
Comment from jim vecchio
Excellent take on the 5-7-5 form. You can't go wrong saluting God's Nature. Spring is so beautiful, and your words and illustration pictured it well. Thank you for posting!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Excellent take on the 5-7-5 form. You can't go wrong saluting God's Nature. Spring is so beautiful, and your words and illustration pictured it well. Thank you for posting!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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thank you for your review.
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Thank you for writing!
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I appreciate your words.
Comment from Heather Bagley
I like the opening line, "Nature teases me" especially in March. It often seems like spring has come at last, and then Mother Nature throws just one more snow at you. Overall a very lovely poem, good luck in the contest!
~Heather
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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I like the opening line, "Nature teases me" especially in March. It often seems like spring has come at last, and then Mother Nature throws just one more snow at you. Overall a very lovely poem, good luck in the contest!
~Heather
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Baltimore Born
This is a very good 5-7-5 for the contest.
I agree that nature is beautiful and arrests our attention. I like the metaphors. It almost gives me the image of a man and woman dancing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Hi Baltimore Born
This is a very good 5-7-5 for the contest.
I agree that nature is beautiful and arrests our attention. I like the metaphors. It almost gives me the image of a man and woman dancing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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No problem, BB.
Joan
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Thank you.
Comment from Sally Law
Lovely traditional haiku poem of spring's captivating charms. Beautifully crafted and presented as she hastens near. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for Spring!
Sally :))
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Lovely traditional haiku poem of spring's captivating charms. Beautifully crafted and presented as she hastens near. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for Spring!
Sally :))
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from Boogienights
This is really beautiful, il captured my imagination right away. Nature can take us away with its sights, sounds and smells. I really get this poem, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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This is really beautiful, il captured my imagination right away. Nature can take us away with its sights, sounds and smells. I really get this poem, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review.
