The Fix
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Fix - Chapter Five"A mother fights to prove her son's innocence
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Did this take place before the son was imprisoned? Not sure, was Stacey reminiscing here about her son having a new girlfriend. Perhaps I have missed part of the story Jacob. Another fine chapter, I enjoyed the natural dialogue, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Did this take place before the son was imprisoned? Not sure, was Stacey reminiscing here about her son having a new girlfriend. Perhaps I have missed part of the story Jacob. Another fine chapter, I enjoyed the natural dialogue, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Hi Dolly, yes, this is a flashback scene. Thank you, I;m pleased that you enjoyed it.