Life's Twisted Road
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Comment from BethShelby
Well since the white powder Bobby bought wasn't found in Bobby's truck. It might be assumed it somehow got transferred to Dion. I would think there is enough evidence to clear him, except Audrey really want Dion to be the cause of the wreck. I don't think Jackson will let that influence him. I missed seeing a post yesterday.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Well since the white powder Bobby bought wasn't found in Bobby's truck. It might be assumed it somehow got transferred to Dion. I would think there is enough evidence to clear him, except Audrey really want Dion to be the cause of the wreck. I don't think Jackson will let that influence him. I missed seeing a post yesterday.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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You might have missed it when Bobby sent Judy in for lunch at the Bottom's up and he quickly hurried to Dion's truck (parked out front) and tossed the drug packets under the seat. When the accident happened, they floated out with the water. Judy remembers the purchase, but she doesn't know what he did. So unless someone else clears him, Dion could still get arrested for possession. I think Audrey will cool down and come to her senses. She's really not a bad person.
Thanks so much....
Smiles, Carol
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No I read that. I know she couldn't prove he planted it, but your readers know he did.
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Yes, but there is proof out there... And don't forget there has to be another big explosion because Isabella was send back by Peter to finish something....I believe I've post Chap 24 and about 3 or 4 chapters will finish it.
Comment from royowen
So after dropping Jaun off, Becky and Natasha are helped inadvertently by the next door neighbour to get to school. Meanwhile, Gabhy is with Judy in hospital, and Jackson interviews Judy with Gabby in attendance and tells of the last minutes of Bobby's useless life, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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So after dropping Jaun off, Becky and Natasha are helped inadvertently by the next door neighbour to get to school. Meanwhile, Gabhy is with Judy in hospital, and Jackson interviews Judy with Gabby in attendance and tells of the last minutes of Bobby's useless life, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for continuing to follow the chapters and to appreciate the story.
Smiles, Carol
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Great writing
Comment from karenina
So many layers to this great story, and you do such a good job of methodically reopening each scenario and giving us a bit more info. I hope Dion is on his way to being cleared, but the wheels of justice can be clunky. Isabella! Hmmm. I think we have some nailbiters coming along!
Great chapter, as always.
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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So many layers to this great story, and you do such a good job of methodically reopening each scenario and giving us a bit more info. I hope Dion is on his way to being cleared, but the wheels of justice can be clunky. Isabella! Hmmm. I think we have some nailbiters coming along!
Great chapter, as always.
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Good day, my friend. It's been a good day and the mind is flowing like the river. I've posted this chapter, almost completed 24 and outlined the final blowout...which depending on my wordiness will take 2 or 3 chapters to finish out the story.... because yes, of course, we have to figure out the plan regarding Isabella and her talk with Peter. It should prove interesting if I come up with enough money to post....
Thanks as always, Carol
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Ah, writing coming easier than promotion money... That's a real thing!
I'm glad you're on a role and hope you are feeling well in every way.
Comment from Teri7
This is another great chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is another great chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Teri. I thought the darkness would soon be over, but Isabella has unfinished business.....
Thanks for the review. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have to do what you have to do, and right now, Gabby has to help Dion. He's done so much to help her, and now she has to help him. I'm so glad Judy remembered what happened, that has saved Dion from going to jail and possibly the death sentence. We don't have that in the UK even though sometimes I wished we did. Great chapter, my dear friend, I'll be looking out for the next chapter. :) Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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You have to do what you have to do, and right now, Gabby has to help Dion. He's done so much to help her, and now she has to help him. I'm so glad Judy remembered what happened, that has saved Dion from going to jail and possibly the death sentence. We don't have that in the UK even though sometimes I wished we did. Great chapter, my dear friend, I'll be looking out for the next chapter. :) Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Sandra... Dion still has to prove the drugs weren't his. Judy knows Bobby bought drugs but how did they get into Dion's truck. Otherwise he is guilty of possession.
In the U.S. many people involved in the law get sloppy and convict innocent people. I fear that someone will be killed for someone else's crime. But when it comes to children, I am swayed about the death sentence easily. Those creeps deserve it!
Now, back to the story.... trouble isn't over yet. Matter of fact the next few chapters are the crescendo to what happened between Natasha and her grandmother and why Peter sent her back to finish something. It will be difficult to write because a lot of it is based on real events (except the deaths). I hope I can write it with the emotion it needs.
Have a great day! Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
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You'll do fine writing it, Carol, being personal, it will end up being your best chapter yet! 🥰😊
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Love you....Thanks!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Gabby needs to betray her friends. They aren't really good friends, they hurt people. I'm glad Judy is telling the truth. I really like this story.
Becky cringed, "Eww! Nat! That's disgusting." (cringed.)
Jackson nodded, "If that's your decision, (nodded.)
After sitting down, he nodded to Judy. "The floor's all yours." (you can omit 'down' it's understood)
Jackson interrupted Judy. (comma after 'Judy,')
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Gabby needs to betray her friends. They aren't really good friends, they hurt people. I'm glad Judy is telling the truth. I really like this story.
Becky cringed, "Eww! Nat! That's disgusting." (cringed.)
Jackson nodded, "If that's your decision, (nodded.)
After sitting down, he nodded to Judy. "The floor's all yours." (you can omit 'down' it's understood)
Jackson interrupted Judy. (comma after 'Judy,')
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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You are the best, Barbara. Those commas and periods will be the death of me. Errors corrected!
One problem almost solved but.... we still don't know how Isabella's visit with Peter works into the story, now do we?
Thanks for stopping by and helping me out.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, the pieces are coming together! We don't have evidence about Bobby planting the drugs but at least Jackson knows now Bobby bought them from Juan. And Gabby can help connect the dots to Juan through her friends. The plot has reached the denouement part of the story!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Yes, the pieces are coming together! We don't have evidence about Bobby planting the drugs but at least Jackson knows now Bobby bought them from Juan. And Gabby can help connect the dots to Juan through her friends. The plot has reached the denouement part of the story!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Yes, some of the pieces are falling together and maybe Jackson can find away to clear any suspicions about Dion and the drugs........but we still haven't answered Isabella's role in the story. Why did Peter send her back to finish something?
Just wondering about it....Are you? LOL
Smiles, Carol
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Now you got me wondering! 😊💖
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Great! Have a very special day!
Comment from patcelaw
This is another very well written chapter in your book. I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing you're writing is very good because you have used good sentence structure you have used very good paragraph structuring and your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best with all of your writing.
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is another very well written chapter in your book. I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing you're writing is very good because you have used good sentence structure you have used very good paragraph structuring and your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best with all of your writing.
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for continuing to follow the story...the excitement is over yet.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
See, I knew you would have Dion cleared. I was surprised that Judy folded so quickly on Bobby. Jason should blow out his knees. Does this make me bad?
Keep writing, I will keep reading. Karen
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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See, I knew you would have Dion cleared. I was surprised that Judy folded so quickly on Bobby. Jason should blow out his knees. Does this make me bad?
Keep writing, I will keep reading. Karen
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Dion is almost cleared...but how does he prove the drugs in his truck were the same one's Bobby bought?
And scum bucket Jason is about to get his come uppance with Gabby. She's a strong girl, ready to fight for her baby.
Oh, Ms. Detective, did you forget about the beginning of this story where Natasha fights with Isabella.... and her grandmother ends up talking to Peter? Haven't seen her mission yet, have you?
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Oooooh, this is full of interesting stuff. Keep writing, please, mamm. Karen:-)
