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Comment from Raul1
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I never knew that a mermaid would need Medicare. She is a fish and looks like she is part human. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Awe, how fun are you today, Raul. Thanks for the awesome comments for Elaine's poem. I love what you said about the mermaids and Medicare. You are so funny. Thank you so much, my awesome friend.
Comment from karenina
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I don't think I know her very well. I'll have to go check in on some of her posts... With a penname like "Mermaid" it's got to be interesting. This size font is perfect...I can actually read it without straining (Oh my, I need to make an eye appointment)--

What can be said about you and your birthday poems? They are always thoughtful, generous, and kind.

Happy birthday to Elaine! I wish I could be 65 again! (LOL)

Nice rhyme and meter -- but you knew that didn't you?

Karenina


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Hi K, I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from jim vecchio
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You've been spying on me! The other day, with no one around, I watched "The Little Mermaid" cartoon again, just to hear the music. Mermaids has always been a blessing to me, like you, in reviews and in providing quality reading on this site. Thank you for another in your never-ending (I hope!) series!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Hi Jim, no shame in watching the little mermaid. Just say you do it for the music. LOL..
    I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by jim vecchio on 18-Feb-2024
    And many thanks to you for helping me to know all these wonderful people!
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi.
This is a good poem about Elaine. I like all the internal rhyme that goes along with your usual end rhyme.
Sorry for her loss. It is good to here that good can come from and relationship started on the internet.
Happy Birthday Elaine.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Hey Joan, I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by dragonpoet on 18-Feb-2024
    You are most kindly welcome, Debi.
    I am sure all these people enjoy their birthday poems as much as I did mine.
    JOan
Comment from jessizero
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This was a lovely birthday poem for Mermaids. I love the name Elaine, and it suits her. You always write the best birthday tributes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Oh Jessi, it is so good to see your sweet smile again. I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello Debi, your poem illustrates Elaine's life and her accomplishments, as well as the heartache she suffered when her beloved husband passed away. Of special note:

Her poetry is fantasy; for her it's therapy
She writes about the unicorns, and things we cannot see
(Nice, happy, something magical.)

Lovely photo choice. I'm glad you used my photo. There's nothing more to say except, Happy Birthday Miss Mermaid Elaine. I hope that you have a fine and beautiful day. Margaret ~ LateBloomer


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Hello, my sweet SOTU, I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome Sis
    Love, Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
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Happy Birthday to our own mermaid Elaine. A lovely tribute to this lovely writer and overall valued person. It was a real treat to read about her in your poem Debi. Perfect artwork to compliment your work and Elaine.

Blessings to you both.
Janet

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Hi Janet, I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I went to her portfolio because she sounded a little familiar, but I wasn't sure. I have read some of her work. I see from your birthday tribute that I am going to have to read much more of her work. Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute with us. Again, you're doing us a service.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Barb, I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Lisasview
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First of all I do so love the whole idea about Mermaids...they go along with Faeries, and other beautiful creatures.
Your choice of image and perfect words are as delightful as always... Definitely brightens my day!!
Lisa

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Hi there Lisa, I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by Lisasview on 19-Feb-2024
    Always a pleasure to read your words...
    Lisa
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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This lady sounds like she's a busy little lady. I love the fact that she works in a nursing home. Not an easy job; I think writing would relieve the tension. Happy birthday to your FS friend.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Hello Rosemary, I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi