Comment from royowen

Excellent

What an excellently expressed poem, as all your poetry is Gypsy, the passion with which you write is both captivating and it engages the emotions deep down, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 16-Feb-2024

Most welcome

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

A stellar tanka, Gypsy!
I always go to the pivot/third line first when I read a tanka. Yours is "spot on" in purpose and intent.
And such a plaintive and emotive message - in perfect tanka form.

Thank you for sharing!
Fondly,
diane

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for the lovely review. May you have a wonderful weekend

gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is quite well written. I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I especially like your Japanese format poems. Patricia .

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for the lovely review. May you have a wonderful weekend

gypsy hugs