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Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "cumulus clouds float tanka"keep your hope alive....
27 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, shelley.
-A well written tanka with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery and opening lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good concluding lines that shows
how the shade from the clouds offers
a welcomed respite.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, shelley.
-A well written tanka with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery and opening lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good concluding lines that shows
how the shade from the clouds offers
a welcomed respite.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you pam 😎👍💙🖋️🦄☁️
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You are welcome, shelley.
Comment from Lisasview
Dearest Shelly,
Another wonder Tanka poem from you...Full of hope... I really like the image you chose to go along with your poem...Works perfectly.
Good luck in the contest,
Lisa.................
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Dearest Shelly,
Another wonder Tanka poem from you...Full of hope... I really like the image you chose to go along with your poem...Works perfectly.
Good luck in the contest,
Lisa.................
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you lisa! 🌝✌️💗🖊️🦄☁️
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You are so welcome..
Lisa
Comment from SimianSavant
This is a cool effect you're going for, and I have a small tweak to suggest that might help you. I tried to do it for you and can't post the link as this site blocks links in initial reviews, but if you respond to this review I can send you a link after. Alternately, you can very easily clean up the image yourself at "remove dot bg", (replacing "dot" with ".") or any of the other dozens of sites that do this. Then you can use your image on any colored background you like, and it should show up nicely.
Thanks for a cool read,
Harambe (for President)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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This is a cool effect you're going for, and I have a small tweak to suggest that might help you. I tried to do it for you and can't post the link as this site blocks links in initial reviews, but if you respond to this review I can send you a link after. Alternately, you can very easily clean up the image yourself at "remove dot bg", (replacing "dot" with ".") or any of the other dozens of sites that do this. Then you can use your image on any colored background you like, and it should show up nicely.
Thanks for a cool read,
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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hmm... the site sounds interesting... will def check it out more! thank you harambe 🤔😊👍💙🖋️🦄
Comment from karenina
Great presentation with the white representing the clouds and the black representing the shadows...
The meaning, to me, that both can be beneficial is a great message.
Thanks for the detailed answer info about the Tanks form.
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Great presentation with the white representing the clouds and the black representing the shadows...
The meaning, to me, that both can be beneficial is a great message.
Thanks for the detailed answer info about the Tanks form.
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you karenina! 🌝✌️💗🖊️🦄☁️
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Welcome!
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Comment from John Ciarmello
Ahh, there you are! I've so missed your poetry and its originality.
The cumulous cloud shadows an oasis as it floats before the sun.
Beautiful! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Ahh, there you are! I've so missed your poetry and its originality.
The cumulous cloud shadows an oasis as it floats before the sun.
Beautiful! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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i'm here!! missed your reviews, too! thank you john! 🌝😊✌️💙🖋️🦄☁️
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation and imagery. Good luck!!!!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Excellent entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation and imagery. Good luck!!!!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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thank you gypsy ✌️😊🤞💙🖊️🦄
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this and really appreciate the two varied components that compare and contrast the clouds and shade. Well done, Shelley and I know it will do well in the contest!
Melissa
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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I love this and really appreciate the two varied components that compare and contrast the clouds and shade. Well done, Shelley and I know it will do well in the contest!
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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thank you ray 😎😁👍💗🖋️🦄
Comment from Sally Law
Lovely tanka poem, Shelley. Tanka was my first poem and contest prize on Fanstory and holds s special place in my heart. Beautifully crafted and presented for the contest. Sending you my best today as always and my good wishes too.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Lovely tanka poem, Shelley. Tanka was my first poem and contest prize on Fanstory and holds s special place in my heart. Beautifully crafted and presented for the contest. Sending you my best today as always and my good wishes too.
Sal :))
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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aw cool! thank you sally 😎😁👍💙🖋️🦄
Comment from GWHARGIS
Out of sixes. I remember as a little girl, playing outside in the summer. Running under tree shade, moving with the shadows. I used to count the seconds until a fat cloud would push in front of the sun. This took me back. All I needed was a drink from the hose. Lol. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Out of sixes. I remember as a little girl, playing outside in the summer. Running under tree shade, moving with the shadows. I used to count the seconds until a fat cloud would push in front of the sun. This took me back. All I needed was a drink from the hose. Lol. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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cool!! thank you gretchen! 😎😁✌️💙🖋️🦄☁️
Comment from XinaD
Well done. Your first two lines definitely made me envision the bright blue sky and the cotton ball cloud, and I love how it turns from beauty to function so seamlessly. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Well done. Your first two lines definitely made me envision the bright blue sky and the cotton ball cloud, and I love how it turns from beauty to function so seamlessly. Excellent job!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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thank you xina! 🌝👍🩷🖊️🦄☁️