Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Life's Twisted Road - Chap 14"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Good writing. You can get pictures from Pinterest, Bing, google, and others for free. You just mention them in you author notes. That picture is lovely but is not given it's kudos. And, spoiler alert: when you go to Pinterest you can get lost in the laughing babies. I go almost every day to get my mood lifted. It never fails to make me smile. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Good writing. You can get pictures from Pinterest, Bing, google, and others for free. You just mention them in you author notes. That picture is lovely but is not given it's kudos. And, spoiler alert: when you go to Pinterest you can get lost in the laughing babies. I go almost every day to get my mood lifted. It never fails to make me smile. Karen
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Karen. I've thought about changing up the pictures but then it's suppose to be a book and the cover never changes. I don't suppose it really matters on FS because the readership depends on the $$$ except for my precious friends. Thanks so much for stopping by.... laughing babies seems a good place to be.
Smiles, Carol
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I do a lot of reviewing, and I forget about covers and stuff. I like to read well-written things like yours and change my pictures for every story or chapter. I am anal that way.
For me, it adds flavor and texture. But many folks
don't. I will keep reading. :-)
Comment from royowen
What an excellent post Carol, Bobby really is a nutcase, and it looks like poor Dion might be in trouble, but if he kills or maims Dion, they'll put him in jail and throw away the key. This is a great finish to this post, well done Carol. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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What an excellent post Carol, Bobby really is a nutcase, and it looks like poor Dion might be in trouble, but if he kills or maims Dion, they'll put him in jail and throw away the key. This is a great finish to this post, well done Carol. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Roy....I know bad things happen to good people, especially in my stories, but it's about to get explosive. Remember the drugs Bobby planted in Dion's truck. Or how Bobby always seems to manage to wiggle out of tight spots. Will it happen now?
Smiles, Carol
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I hope not
Comment from BethShelby
I don't know who is about to die. Mayby all three but the world might be a better place if it was just Bobby. He sounds very drunk and seriously crazy. You make whatever happened here come to life with you creative talent.
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I don't know who is about to die. Mayby all three but the world might be a better place if it was just Bobby. He sounds very drunk and seriously crazy. You make whatever happened here come to life with you creative talent.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I was terrified to write a chase scene... hoping it would come to life on paper. I am thrilled you enjoyed it. Now, to finish of the scene and expose the outcome. Drum roll......
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
My goodness, an angry drunken fool behind the wheel. Not looking forward to what the next chapter will bring. You described his drunken fury very well, and also Judy's fear. Excellent writing, a very dramatic chapter.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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My goodness, an angry drunken fool behind the wheel. Not looking forward to what the next chapter will bring. You described his drunken fury very well, and also Judy's fear. Excellent writing, a very dramatic chapter.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Thank you for blessing me with the six. I've never written a car chase (oops - truck chase) and wasn't sure I could put on paper what was buzzing through my head. I am beyond thrilled that you enjoyed the build up.... The next chapter will change many lives. I am honored by your thoughts.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
I guess it's decades too late for anger management classes, huh? Hey! Bobby's actions sound like attempted murder to me! My own knuckles are white from gripping my Kindle as I read thus. You are triumphantly back in the saddle and this story has, it seems, given you back your MoJo and confidence! You have mere hours to choose which chapter you'd like to promote! I don't have a million dollars, but I'll place my member dollars on you any day!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I guess it's decades too late for anger management classes, huh? Hey! Bobby's actions sound like attempted murder to me! My own knuckles are white from gripping my Kindle as I read thus. You are triumphantly back in the saddle and this story has, it seems, given you back your MoJo and confidence! You have mere hours to choose which chapter you'd like to promote! I don't have a million dollars, but I'll place my member dollars on you any day!
Karenina
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I'd never written a car chase (oops - truck chase) before so I am flattered to know you felt the adrenalin in the words. I imagined the hatred filling Bobby's entire being and the fear the young Dion must feel. He just wanted to help Gabby and his own world exploded because of Bobby. It's about to get real serious.
You, my friend, are so kind. I believe this chapter and the next will be the best ones I've written. I might have fallen out of the saddle tonight... but then there is always tomorrow to BEGIN AGAIN! What a foolish old lady...
I appreciate your kindness.....
Love ya, Carol
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Still waiting for a PM, you! Which one?
