Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Debi, I'd like to wish Dawn a Happy Birthday, and thank her for sharing her birthday and life story with us. I don't really know Dawn, but I can see that she has had an amazing life.

Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of note:

She is a female Jill of many trades that's helped her grow

(It plain to see, that Dawn is a very talented women.
Question ... female Jill of many trades, or female "Jack" ... just wondering. The decision is yours, and it does not detract from your writing.)

Lovely photo choice. Happy Birthday, Dawn!
Margaret ~ LateBloomer

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Yeah, I had it as female Jack of many trades but someone suggested it the other way and you know me. And yet, I should have listened to my guy and left it. Thanks sweetie! It's going back the way I wrote it in the first place.

Thanks for the awesome review and comments my dear SOTU!
Love, sista Debi

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

What a wonderful, poet this is for Dawn, on her birthday. She will be thrilled, or at least I hope so. I've always been a great fan of hers. She's helped me a lot over the years. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Hi Ulla, I thank you so very much for the awesome comments for Dawn and her poem.
I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Excellent birthday poem full of information, good sensory words, and vibrant imagery. Thank you for sharing this. Happy Birthday to dawn!! :) I enjoyed reviewing this whole presentation!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Hi Alex, I thank you so very much for the awesome comments for Dawn and her poem.
I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Happy Birthday Dawn Munro. I always enjoy learning about our FanStory friends. We all come such varied backgrounds and Dawn has quite a few and yet we all connect here. Thank you, Debi, for sharing Dawn's story.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Hi Janet, I thank you so very much for the awesome comments for Dawn and her poem.
I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

She really is a jill-of-trades, isn't she? I hope she has a very happy birthday with lots of Cleo cuddles! Loved that line: And sings her praise, like she's on fire.
Way to go!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Hi there Tony! And how kind of you to take the time to review this poem for Dawn. Your kind words mean a lot to me, as always. Thanks so very much, my dear friend. Debi

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Debi, Thank You so much for sharing
Dawn's birthday with us...she is a wonderful
friend of mine...I knew some of these things
about her through her writings...but I am so
grateful to get to know her even better now...

she is such a sweet person...and a very talented
writer...and now I know she has so many other talents...
from me to you Dawn...HAPPY BIRTHDAY Angel...and
so many more...

I love your poem beautiful girl...and love all the pictures...
priceless...very nicely written...as always ...right from the
heart...love much Debi...Linda xxoo
I love your video's...

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Hi Linda, I thank you so very much for the awesome comments for Dawn and her poem.
I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi

reply by l.raven on 03-Feb-2024

Hi Debi, your so very welcome sweet
girl...always...love xxoo 💝💝🙏🤗😘🌼

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Another birthday greeting poem, you are the queen of them. I know you Invest a lot of time and love with each one. Well done!

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

My dear Gypsy, I thank you so very much for the awesome comments for Dawn and her poem.
I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

Happy Birthday to Dawn, she definitely does sound like a really nice person and someone who would be a great friend to have. Another excellent birthday poem, Debi. I really enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Hi Jacob, I thank you so very much for the awesome comments for Dawn and her poem.
I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Hey there... I actually read this 4:30am today when I got up for work. Here I am 12 hours later answering the call...

What can I say? You notched another fine birthday tribute that I'm sure has Dawn smiling away while cuddling Cleo.

You are the master birthday wisher for dang sure!

Always a pleasure to read these. Don't stop!


Cheers...
John

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Awe, John, I don't mind if you pass me by, cause I know you will be back later. And thanks ever so much for that. I know that I say this often but it is worth saying again, you are the BEST!!!! Thanks for the kind comments!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and very well written birthday poem for Dawn. She is a very special lady and a very special friend. I hope she has a very happy and blessed birthday and many more! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Hi Teri, thanks so very much for the awesome comments for Dawn and her poem.
I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi