Comment from Pearl Edwards

Exceptional

Congratulations on the contest win for your ten word poem. I love the alliteration which, for me, adds to the drama of your words. I do think you're right those that seek power never are satisfied and always seeking more.
Well done.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Dear Valda, Thank you for this review. I appreciate those stars! I also appreciate your notice of the alliteration. It's an honor. - Jamison

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Dang it! I hate it when I miss these wonderful entries! I'm so glad you won, Jamison, because this is awesome. Truly creative and beautifully presented. Sending you my best today as always and my best congratulations on your blue ribbon.
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Yep, this one slipped under the radar (smile). I am grateful you found it, dear Sal. As always, thank you. - Jamison

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hello there,
This is quite interesting. Your artwork tells its own tale, but the strength of the mere ten words drives the point home. I wish you well in the contest,
~MP~

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Thank you, Patty. Thank you for this review and the well wishes. Also, I appreciate your notice of the artwork.

Take care! - Jamison

Comment from jaded831

Exceptional

Your words speak the truth, we need less hateful words, especially those spoken by our former president. Hopefully his followers will realize the truth before we all have to pay for it.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Dear Carolyn, Thank you for this great review. The six stars are a special honor for me.

Take care. Be safe. - Jamison

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

This is a brilliant entry for this particular contest dear anonymous! Despite the pessimistic tone, the message is something else.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
This should do well.
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Rebekka, thank you for this wonderful review. The stars are an honor. I appreciate your encouragement and kindness.

Take care, and have a great weekend! - Jamison

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The lust fo power is nothing new, it's what has cost countless lives, all because someone's pride carried them into narcissism's realm of sacrificing the lives and hope of others, it's so tragic, well done, luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

We never learn. Power, in man's form, is indeed toxic. It is truly an age-old problem.

Thanks, Roy. - Jamison

reply by royowen on 18-Jan-2024

Good job

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A well balanced 19 word composition on power and morals. Very creative imagery in both image and verse. Loved the alliteration ( seeking, sacrificing soul, seeds sown) and the assonance of the "o" in hollow toll.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Thanks, Tom. I appreciate the great review. I am grateful for your notice of the alliteration. Take care. - Jamison

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Certainly on point with todays world. Image is great and forlorn. Like the whole deal. Best of luck in the competition . Take care and have a great day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

The message of this poem does sadly align with current events. I hope find a way toward a brighter future.

Thanks, Barry. - Jamison

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Well, this is certainly a brilliant commentary you managed expertly with just ten words. You selected them well and made SUCH an important, excellent point. You chose the perfect artwork for it, as well. Best of luck to you in the contest, Mystery Contestant. I think this one's exceptional. xo

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Everyone has a favorite thing to do; I think the short works are it for me. And, of course, I most definitely enjoy reading your great reviews.

Thank you, Rachelle. - Jamison

reply by Rachelle Allen on 19-Jan-2024

You are concise. You have a talent for bottom-lining.

Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

Best wishes for your writing prompt entry; all so true. The choice is ours but the rewards are nasty. One man choosing wealth and control of your country in exchange for his soul will soon be a tall poppy falling.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Dear Kay, Thank you for this great review. Your stars are lighting up my day. I appreciate and agree with your sentiments.

Until next time, take care and be safe. - Jamison