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Comment from Boogienights
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Happy birthday! I hope it's filled with many blessings and some great surprises. I've learned so much about FanStory members through this series of poems. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
    Hi Sharon, I thank you so very much for the lovely review for my poem for James.... He will enjoy all the nice birthday wishes
    I appreciate all your kind comments too, my very dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Look at that another great and wonderful poem I like how you center your poems on other people and on their lies and what they do you extend those birthday wishes those congratulations and all the wonderful things that make people smile so really good on you! So I'm sure you're fine rugby playing friend would you please to read this! Casino issues with grammar aesthetic subject matter or sentence structure great job best of luck to you!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
    Lea, I thank you so very much for the lovely review for my poem for James.... He will enjoy all the nice birthday wishes
    I appreciate all your kind comments too, my very dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Another lovely and well informed birthday tribute, this time to James, to whom I wish a very happy birthday! Clearly, a man with many skills who's led an action-filled life and is a great contributor to FS. Thanks for sharing, Debi! Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
    Debbie, I thank you so very much for the lovely review for my poem for James.... He will enjoy all the nice birthday wishes
    I appreciate all your kind comments too, my very dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Kingsrookviii
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What a lovely tribute to this lucky guy. I absolutely love the picture and cursive format, even though it was a bit harder to read. My Gid, I'm getting old; but, that's a reason I appreciate your sentiments and loyal love. Awesome.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
    I thank you so very much, for the lovely review for my poem for James
    He will enjoy all the nice birthday wishes
    I appreciate all your kind comments too, my very dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Debi, this is a beautiful tribute to Jim, Jumbo J. I'm not familiar with Jim or his writing, but he sounds like a wonderful man. Of special note:

This man who we are honoring wears his heart on his sleeve
And what you see is what you get, and what you can believe

(How refreshing)

Good rhyming. Lovely photo choice. A pleasure to read. Well done.
Xo. M

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
    Margaret,you are so sweet. I thank you so very much, for the lovely review for my poem for James
    He will enjoy all the nice birthday wishes
    I appreciate all your kind comments too, my very dear SOTU!.
    Love, Debi
Comment from NanaGaye
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As usual a great story in your wonderful poem about a special outgoing person making the most out of pass times he enjoys. Picture is perfect and the background color matches the ocean tones. Have a great day

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Oh Nana, you sweetheart!! Thank you with all my heart for always having such kind words for my poems. I appreciated it so very much. And James will enjoy the wishes, I am sure. We also thank you for your generous six stars. You are so very thoughtful.. Love, Debi
reply by NanaGaye on 14-Jan-2024
    Smiles to you
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Great rhyming and steady rhythm in your birthday poem for Jumbo J. I haven't yet met him, but I read some of his portfolio tonight. I like all the information about his life that you included in your poem. That helps us get to know him. Happy birthday to James! Thanks for sharing, Debi.
Carol

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
    Carol,I thank you so very much, for the lovely review for my poem for James
    He will enjoy all the nice birthday wishes
    I appreciate all your kind comments too, my very dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from aryr
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To have a special eve, James is supposed a special time, Debi. Happy Birthday to James and his sweet wife, Jade. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Awe, thank you so very much. Yes, it was so weird that I looked up the time difference between me and South Wales, Australia, and it said six hours so I had it all planned to have it for him to read at 6AM. But now when I look up lluka, South Wales, it says 12 hours. I guess I don't know much about that area. So it rhymed so I used it. LOL... thanks for your sweet words for James's poem, my dear friend. So appreciated. Debi
reply by aryr on 16-Jan-2024
    Wow! You are so welcome, Debi.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this amazing man, Jumbo J with us. I have had the pleasure of reading many of his posts. Someone introduced him to me a few months back. Much to my happiness. Again, you are doing us a great service.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    You are an Angel for as kind as you always, Barb. Thank you with all my heart for always having such kind words for my poems. I appreciated it so very much. And James will enjoy the wishes, I am sure. Love, Debi
Comment from Ulla
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You've done it again, Debi. You've written a lovely tribute and birthday poem for James yet another writer on our site. We also get to know a great deal about him.. I really enjoyed reading this. I'm sure James will be pleasantly surprised. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Ulla thank you with all my heart for always having such kind words for my poems. I appreciated it so very much. And James will enjoy the wishes, I am sure. Love, Debi