Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Miles"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a beautiful chapter, Lea and so worthy of a 6 which sadly I don't have. You start with a fine sonnet, immerse us in your current plans which sound idyllic and then back to the past. (then) how can I blame him? The excitement and sense of euphoria are palpable and we celebrate with you on this next stage, albeit wary now of what is to come. Always enjoy those breakfast smells infusing your write and capturing that sense of belonging and contentment. Thank you, Lea. Love Debbie x
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is a beautiful chapter, Lea and so worthy of a 6 which sadly I don't have. You start with a fine sonnet, immerse us in your current plans which sound idyllic and then back to the past. (then) how can I blame him? The excitement and sense of euphoria are palpable and we celebrate with you on this next stage, albeit wary now of what is to come. Always enjoy those breakfast smells infusing your write and capturing that sense of belonging and contentment. Thank you, Lea. Love Debbie x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Debbie thank you so much again Billy has such awesome things to say and I sound like a broken record but I have to keep saying it because it's true! I'm glad you like it truly appreciate it as always your words are full of wisdom thank you again!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am glad you will be packing to move to your new home soon Lea and I wish you luck with a new start in life. And your story continues here from the past as a new chapter starts with positivity, much enjoyed Lea, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I am glad you will be packing to move to your new home soon Lea and I wish you luck with a new start in life. And your story continues here from the past as a new chapter starts with positivity, much enjoyed Lea, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Dolly I appreciate this very much as always your reviews are gold to me I appreciate them and your insight and your wisdom! Thanks again I hope you're enjoying the canaries!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
So was this an happy exit or not? I am kind of let on the edge wondering. Anyway thank you for sharing maybe I will found out tomorrow in the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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So was this an happy exit or not? I am kind of let on the edge wondering. Anyway thank you for sharing maybe I will found out tomorrow in the next chapter.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hello Iza yes you will indeed find out! Thank you so much for your fine review and again apologies for my lateness I hope that you're having a wonderful day I appreciate all that you say and for your insight which is amazing thanks again!