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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Yes, the 'Make A Wish Foundation' does amazing things helping these children's wish come true. Thank you for highlighting them in this poem.

Children Ward field trip (I read this as 'Children's Ward'. It may just be me.)

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much. I fixed it, thanks!

    Gypsy hugs