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Comment from Lisasview
This so wonderful... ABC and so so clever!!!
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest... dear whomever you are...
Lisasview, now living full time in beautiful Spain
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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This so wonderful... ABC and so so clever!!!
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest... dear whomever you are...
Lisasview, now living full time in beautiful Spain
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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lol! thank you lisa :-)
Comment from HarryT
This little work has great meaning for anyone who reads and understands the space between the lines. Excellent work. Love it, especially," in the shadows of the unspoken." I wonder if unwritten may have been more to the point.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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This little work has great meaning for anyone who reads and understands the space between the lines. Excellent work. Love it, especially," in the shadows of the unspoken." I wonder if unwritten may have been more to the point.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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thank you harry :-)
Comment from estory
I like the mysterious abstractness of the language here. The words that express feelings you can read in between the lines, the secrets we keep in the words left unsaid. Short but sweet. estory
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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I like the mysterious abstractness of the language here. The words that express feelings you can read in between the lines, the secrets we keep in the words left unsaid. Short but sweet. estory
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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thank you estory :-)
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent my friend now this is real art and feeling in its poetic essence where the imagery metaphors descriptions words and the lines come to life and prove a piece for what it is worth this gets a six for its exuberant profound teaching with a direct influence from the format.
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Excellent my friend now this is real art and feeling in its poetic essence where the imagery metaphors descriptions words and the lines come to life and prove a piece for what it is worth this gets a six for its exuberant profound teaching with a direct influence from the format.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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cool. thank you bic :-)
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Anytime ...
Comment from Navada
I really enjoyed your terrific imagery here and the interplay between the artwork and your beautifully crafted words. This is where the magic happens. :)
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I really enjoyed your terrific imagery here and the interplay between the artwork and your beautifully crafted words. This is where the magic happens. :)
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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hehe thank you navada :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We often read between the lines as our words reveal only half the story. I enjoyed your clever few words that spoke volumes here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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We often read between the lines as our words reveal only half the story. I enjoyed your clever few words that spoke volumes here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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yup! thank you dolly :-)
Comment from karenina
Definitely elegantly presented. I enjoy this form, and you have elevated it so effectively by addressing the depth of leaning between the lines of every good poem.
Best of luck.
Excellent use of staggering the lines!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Definitely elegantly presented. I enjoy this form, and you have elevated it so effectively by addressing the depth of leaning between the lines of every good poem.
Best of luck.
Excellent use of staggering the lines!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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thank you karenina! :-)
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Very welcome!
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely done here. The presentation is vivid and drawing those connections that writers intend to and hope draw out deeper meaning to the reader.
Wishing you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Very nicely done here. The presentation is vivid and drawing those connections that writers intend to and hope draw out deeper meaning to the reader.
Wishing you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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hehe thank you gloria :-)
Comment from Heather Knight
This is not only beautifully written, but also so true.
As writers, we love words, but those words hide so many secrets, so many bits of ourselves.
I find this kind of poem very difficult to write, but I might give it a try. After reading yours, I feel pretty motivated.
Thanks for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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This is not only beautifully written, but also so true.
As writers, we love words, but those words hide so many secrets, so many bits of ourselves.
I find this kind of poem very difficult to write, but I might give it a try. After reading yours, I feel pretty motivated.
Thanks for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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cool! thank you heather :-)
Comment from Daylily
This entry is visually appealing and intellectually intriguing. I am not that clever with ABC poems and so the high quality of this one is very much appreciated. Best wishes, Mystery Poet!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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This entry is visually appealing and intellectually intriguing. I am not that clever with ABC poems and so the high quality of this one is very much appreciated. Best wishes, Mystery Poet!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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thank you lily :-)