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Sandra's brother Ian passed away
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Comment from
Navada
I really enjoyed this romp with the squirrels and they certainly seem to be behaving in a rather unusual fashion here! I enjoyed your metre and rhyming scheme and it was just good plain fun. I really hope Sandra enjoys it and I imagine that she will. :)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
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Paul McFarland
Very nice humorous Christmas poem, Dawn. I have bird feeders that the squirrels try to get into. They are clever buggers. No matter what I do, They will eventually figure out a solution.
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
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Carol Hillebrenner
This is a fun poem about the little critters outside that need feeding and meant for Sandra as she is ill in the hospital. I do hope she gets better very quickly and does miss all of the holiday.
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
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