Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Patch and Ruby ~Hawaii or Bust~"Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from Sarah Robin
I have been thoroughly entertained and I am still smiling! Thanks for sharing this poem. Animals are funny. Merry Christmas to you and yours! And a very happy New year that brings us good health and joy. Hugs. Sarah
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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I have been thoroughly entertained and I am still smiling! Thanks for sharing this poem. Animals are funny. Merry Christmas to you and yours! And a very happy New year that brings us good health and joy. Hugs. Sarah
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Wow, Sarah, I still can?t believe you gave me two of your six stars for my poems. I feel so very honored and also so very grateful to you. Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your fun review for Patch and Ruby. It was a lot of fun to write too. So thank you again, for it all. The fun comments and the stars. So appreciated, my awesome friend.
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL. Very funny stuff. I will say, as an experienced Cat Daddy, I don't know any cat who would want daily bread. They want Tender Vittles or chicken from the Colonel...you do know one of the secret spices is catnip. Very creative and well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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LOL. Very funny stuff. I will say, as an experienced Cat Daddy, I don't know any cat who would want daily bread. They want Tender Vittles or chicken from the Colonel...you do know one of the secret spices is catnip. Very creative and well done. Terry.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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LOL, definition of daily bread for these cats are exactly what you just said!
Thanks, Terry, for the fun review. I love cat language as silly as it is.
I was feline purr-ty good about your comments. It was pawsitively pawesome of you to cat-ch my poem! Thanks so much!
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LOL!
Comment from Jacob1395
It is fascinating to see different personalities in animals. I've had two dogs, the same breed, from the same family, and they are both so different to each other. A well written piece, Debi, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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It is fascinating to see different personalities in animals. I've had two dogs, the same breed, from the same family, and they are both so different to each other. A well written piece, Debi, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Jim, ' Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind ' words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
Comment from Wendy G
That was a fun write, and I bet you enjoyed writing it. One had to keep reading to see if they succeeded! I enjoyed the slight adaptations of words to include 'cat' or 'kit'. Well done. Clever!
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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That was a fun write, and I bet you enjoyed writing it. One had to keep reading to see if they succeeded! I enjoyed the slight adaptations of words to include 'cat' or 'kit'. Well done. Clever!
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Wendy, Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend, love, Debi
Comment from JSD
For someone who has said they're having to cut back on writing and reviewing, you are certainly still managing to write the most amazing poems on a regular basis. I hope this is a sign of renewed health. This is such fun and so well constructed. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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For someone who has said they're having to cut back on writing and reviewing, you are certainly still managing to write the most amazing poems on a regular basis. I hope this is a sign of renewed health. This is such fun and so well constructed. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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John, so far only the closest friends know this. Yes, the treatments were hard, but last week they did all the tests at the hospital which was supposed to be an overnighter. They sent me home with not even doing the overnight one because what they could read early were all showing signs that the treatment protocol from Mayo was working.. They declared I was in remission. However it doesn?t change any damage the lupus has already done throughout the years, such as my stage four kidneys, and joints, bones etc, but has stopped the start of it going toward the heart and brain for now. I am so relieved and do have some new zest for life, yet they still control my screen time. I fixed them, I rediscovered paper and pen. LOL.
Thanks dear friend for the most wonderful compliment ever. I truly needed it right now. You are awesome, but I guess I always knew that. Merry Christmas, with lotsa love, Debi
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Wow! That's amazing. I'm not used to coping with real life Debi, I usually run away and hide. But I'm so grateful to you for sending this message to me and so pleased for you. But you take care! Don't overdo it! And have a lovely festive season. Xxx
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John, if you never read anything from me again, I beg you to read this short comical story about myself.
It is called ADHD Procrastinator. You may find out that I?m your long lost sister.
https://fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1095585
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That was great. Really enjoyed it. I'm more OCD really but I've found during a course of psycho-therapy this year that more of a key to my character is my father and general parental neglect. We were very middle class and dad was a vicar but they were in their fifties and I never saw them. Working through it. X
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Thanks a lot for reading it, John. I was in rare form that day. LOL. But I do get it. My OCD is minor compared to most as it will only bother me if you tried to put my table at an angle or a picture not straight. Then I will go crazy until they are back lined up straight again. Thanks again, and it?s time I come see some of your posts. See you soon.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
What a cute poem, Debi! I remember about Patch's adventure in her new home, but missed the one about Ruby. You had many clever kitty lines throughout. I can tell you had a lot of fun with this one.
Good thing their nefarious plot was overturned!
Much love to everyone involved!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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What a cute poem, Debi! I remember about Patch's adventure in her new home, but missed the one about Ruby. You had many clever kitty lines throughout. I can tell you had a lot of fun with this one.
Good thing their nefarious plot was overturned!
Much love to everyone involved!
Rhonda
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Hahaha! I will email you the link to the first one. But thanks Sweetie for the awesome comments and having fun with me on this. Yes, the first one will help you understand why I started this. Thanks so much, Hon, for the six stars too. I know you love your cats too. I did have fun with it.
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You?re quite welcome, and the laughter raised my spirits.
You don?t want your kitty hanging with mine. He?s an outside cat that is half feral, except to me and our Red Heeler who is half scared of him.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment from aryr
I could imagine the pictures of Patch and Ruby visiting Grandmama (Helen's mother), Debi. Patch and Ruby can come up with some adventures! Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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I could imagine the pictures of Patch and Ruby visiting Grandmama (Helen's mother), Debi. Patch and Ruby can come up with some adventures! Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Alie, thanks for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
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You are so welcome, Debi.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A fun post here about these mischievous cats! I can tell you had fun with this, Debi, searching out all those kitty phrases and idioms:) Thanks for sharing your lovely verse. Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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A fun post here about these mischievous cats! I can tell you had fun with this, Debi, searching out all those kitty phrases and idioms:) Thanks for sharing your lovely verse. Debbie
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Debbie, ' Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
Comment from Navada
Ha! I loved the inventiveness here and the awareness and understanding of cats' intelligence. I just wouldn't put it past them to plan an adventure, but then decide it's quite cold inside and they'd rather be curled up together somewhere warm. Lovely writing! :)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Ha! I loved the inventiveness here and the awareness and understanding of cats' intelligence. I just wouldn't put it past them to plan an adventure, but then decide it's quite cold inside and they'd rather be curled up together somewhere warm. Lovely writing! :)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Nevada, ' Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
I never figured you to be a tattler. I guess you never heard "Snitches get stitches." Better look behind you whenever these two are around. They may see revenge on you somehow.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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I never figured you to be a tattler. I guess you never heard "Snitches get stitches." Better look behind you whenever these two are around. They may see revenge on you somehow.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Hahaha! Lol, its a rough job but someone has to do it. Gotta keep those young ones in line, y?know? Thanks for having some one w me in this, sweet BBB!