Comment from
barbara.wilkey
No, Kristy can't fall for him like you did. I see we're back to the present. Angela needs to come clean with Paul. I still want to know what happened to Caz. Who was the woman who Paul got into the car with outside their workplace. This is a good write.
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Comment from
BethShelby
Well darn, we're not going to find out what happened with Caz just yet. We are back to when the story started. Either way, it is very good story and I am enjoying it. It seem Angela does want any police involvement in her life so I'm wondering how involved she is in whatever happened to Caz.
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