2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "I Love You Even Then".
23 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This poem sounds like you've been there and how! I love the humor and the fun way you play with the words so that the reader can depict the love between the two of you.
Thanks for sharing your fun side, my friend.
We all need to laugh at ourselves every once in a while.
Jesse
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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This poem sounds like you've been there and how! I love the humor and the fun way you play with the words so that the reader can depict the love between the two of you.
Thanks for sharing your fun side, my friend.
We all need to laugh at ourselves every once in a while.
Jesse
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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How are you doing, Jesse? I hope all is well.
Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy Hug
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well he looks very cool despite his faults! Love this bit of fun here, Gypsy. It's so easy to look at your partner and think that's not the man I married, what happened to him? But you love him just the same! A great job with humour and relatability! Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Well he looks very cool despite his faults! Love this bit of fun here, Gypsy. It's so easy to look at your partner and think that's not the man I married, what happened to him? But you love him just the same! A great job with humour and relatability! Debbie
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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I love the picture, a very sexy sixty-something man. I would date him. LoL
Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy Hug
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written at it is presented very beautifully. I wish you the very best with all of your writing, and I wish you the very best in the free verse contest. Patricia.
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This is very well written at it is presented very beautifully. I wish you the very best with all of your writing, and I wish you the very best in the free verse contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy Hug
Comment from Paul Manton
I should be so lucky to have a partner who loved me as much as that!
A really well constructed set of three critiques: physical attributes 3/10, age of and taste in clothes 2/10 and snoring every night 1/10, which amounts to a love that can overcome a 6/30 score.
Miraculous!
Paul
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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I should be so lucky to have a partner who loved me as much as that!
A really well constructed set of three critiques: physical attributes 3/10, age of and taste in clothes 2/10 and snoring every night 1/10, which amounts to a love that can overcome a 6/30 score.
Miraculous!
Paul
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy Hug
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Welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from royowen
Yes, it's very hard sleeping with someone that snores, but it does depend on how much you love them, chemistry between men and women is such a tenuous thing. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Yes, it's very hard sleeping with someone that snores, but it does depend on how much you love them, chemistry between men and women is such a tenuous thing. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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LoL it's supposed to be funny, I would never kill my husband for snoring. I snore too.
Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy Hug
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Good job
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was wonderful. Both pictures are exquisite. The humor was light and affectionate. This romance of long-standing. The good kind. Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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This was wonderful. Both pictures are exquisite. The humor was light and affectionate. This romance of long-standing. The good kind. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy Hug
Comment from L. Kalere
I got a chuckle out of this one Gypsy. Many long term relationships are somewhat love/hate, but most people would deny it. I enjoy free verse poetry because it allows us to express ourselves more naturally, with a more subtle rhythm and pace. As usual it's a striking presentation. Well done. It should do very well in the contest.
Linda
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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I got a chuckle out of this one Gypsy. Many long term relationships are somewhat love/hate, but most people would deny it. I enjoy free verse poetry because it allows us to express ourselves more naturally, with a more subtle rhythm and pace. As usual it's a striking presentation. Well done. It should do very well in the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
Say what?
Marival plotting murder, even in jest?
Well thank goodness I'm not the only one who has dipped briefly south of sanity!
We can't be arrested for fleeting thoughts!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Say what?
Marival plotting murder, even in jest?
Well thank goodness I'm not the only one who has dipped briefly south of sanity!
We can't be arrested for fleeting thoughts!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Haha... not really but she may think about it. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.
Love you
Marival
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Thank goodness thinking about assault isn't A crime!
(wink)
Comment from tfawcus
There are some people you just can't help loving no matter how they annoy you. This is a lovely poem that shows things as they are. None of that Hallmark claptrap!
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There are some people you just can't help loving no matter how they annoy you. This is a lovely poem that shows things as they are. None of that Hallmark claptrap!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, Tony (*÷*) I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Goodnight, or day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Navada
Yes - the final stanza, in particular, made me laugh out loud! This is a wry, loving reflection on the humanness of relationships and the things we put up with sometimes for the sake of our loved ones (and they for us!). Thanks for the share!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Yes - the final stanza, in particular, made me laugh out loud! This is a wry, loving reflection on the humanness of relationships and the things we put up with sometimes for the sake of our loved ones (and they for us!). Thanks for the share!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.
Gypsy hugs