2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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16 total reviews
Comment from Navada
I really enjoyed your intertwined imagery here, with the clouds, dew and tears combining to create an atmosphere of sadness and regret. This is a lovely piece - thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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I really enjoyed your intertwined imagery here, with the clouds, dew and tears combining to create an atmosphere of sadness and regret. This is a lovely piece - thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Navada, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem (*-*) Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Sometimes life can get tangled, and it needs some thorough mending. Southbound grey clouds and paper-sprinkled tears can bring no sunny skies for sure.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Sometimes life can get tangled, and it needs some thorough mending. Southbound grey clouds and paper-sprinkled tears can bring no sunny skies for sure.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Rosemary, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem (*-*) Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Yusita
How I enjoy your writing! So much beautifully said in such few words... every word carefully chosen and every line plump with sentimental imagery and deep meaning. I loved this!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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How I enjoy your writing! So much beautifully said in such few words... every word carefully chosen and every line plump with sentimental imagery and deep meaning. I loved this!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Yusita, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem (*-*) Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and I get kind of confused about the different forms of Japanese poetry. I do well to get a five-7-5 in my own writing. I wish you the very best and all of your writing and I love the way you've present things because they're usually very beautiful.
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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This is very well written, and I get kind of confused about the different forms of Japanese poetry. I do well to get a five-7-5 in my own writing. I wish you the very best and all of your writing and I love the way you've present things because they're usually very beautiful.
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Patricia, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem (*-*) Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. It was a great tanka. I really loved the picture that showed the clouds, the moon and the love poems with the tears. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. It was a great tanka. I really loved the picture that showed the clouds, the moon and the love poems with the tears. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Aryr,
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This just hit me in all the feels. I loved the visuals. The heart dipped in lonesome dew and the paper sprinkled with tears. Both lines blew me away. Visually stunning. Gretchen
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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This just hit me in all the feels. I loved the visuals. The heart dipped in lonesome dew and the paper sprinkled with tears. Both lines blew me away. Visually stunning. Gretchen
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Gretchen
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
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