Velvet Blue
a 5-7-5 poem27 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhh, how I've been missing these kinds of beautiful, simple, straight-to-the-poet's-heart creations that are your calling card, Melissa. So gorgeously done...and did you ever find the PERFECT artwork for it, too!! I hope this boogies down to the Winner's Circle. xoxo
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Ohhh, how I've been missing these kinds of beautiful, simple, straight-to-the-poet's-heart creations that are your calling card, Melissa. So gorgeously done...and did you ever find the PERFECT artwork for it, too!! I hope this boogies down to the Winner's Circle. xoxo
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Hi Rachelle... I've missed you in my absence. I am so appreciative of your lovely comments on this haiku! Thank you, my friend.
Melissa
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That's like saying "thanks for eating ice cream." XOXOXO
Comment from Mrs. KT
Beautiful imagery rendered in your 3 line poetic offering, Melissa!
So wonderful to see your smiling face and excellent writing!
I so appreciate the imagery and the phrase, "velvet blue."
Wishing you and yours a beautiful holiday season!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Beautiful imagery rendered in your 3 line poetic offering, Melissa!
So wonderful to see your smiling face and excellent writing!
I so appreciate the imagery and the phrase, "velvet blue."
Wishing you and yours a beautiful holiday season!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Hi Diane. I hope you are well and that your snowy toes aren't too frosty :). Thank you for your lovely comments on this haiku. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
I often wish we had clearer skies and brighter stars here in the UK where the effect you feature in your three liner is often smothered by capital effect or cloud.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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I often wish we had clearer skies and brighter stars here in the UK where the effect you feature in your three liner is often smothered by capital effect or cloud.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Hello Jim... here's to wishing you midnight skies bedecked in gems :). And the wish that you are awake to see them LOL. Thanks for the comments. Hope you are out and about enjoying the beginning of the holidays. I have a bad cold and major chest congestion, so I'm home nursing myself and grumbling ~ haha, not really, I feel too yucky to even do that. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Daylily
This is a beautiful entry in the 3 line poetry contest. It is very soothing and I could go on looking at that gorgeous artwork forever. I think you are going to do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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This is a beautiful entry in the 3 line poetry contest. It is very soothing and I could go on looking at that gorgeous artwork forever. I think you are going to do well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much for your lovely review and comments!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
What a good look at this time of day when the softness of night is viewed through the lens of metaphorical insight dear friend, it's good to see you back Melanie, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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What a good look at this time of day when the softness of night is viewed through the lens of metaphorical insight dear friend, it's good to see you back Melanie, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much, Roy. Hugs!
Melissa
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a magical post Melissa and I wonder, is that the moon or the sun bringing the light in your picture? If it is midnight, then it must be the moon. The stars are like gems and I enjoyed the scene described here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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This is a magical post Melissa and I wonder, is that the moon or the sun bringing the light in your picture? If it is midnight, then it must be the moon. The stars are like gems and I enjoyed the scene described here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Hello there Christine... thanks so much for your lovely words about this verse. So glad you enjoyed it!
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I love your use of active verb to describe the night sky that is full of beautiful and shining crystalline gems. Yes. It's like a animal coming to throw gems to the velvet blue sky.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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I love your use of active verb to describe the night sky that is full of beautiful and shining crystalline gems. Yes. It's like a animal coming to throw gems to the velvet blue sky.
Excellent.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much, Lisa for your lovely review and comments!! So glad you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
The stars in the skies are heaven when touched, Melissa. You dress them in their heavenly beauty as they sparkle from your eyes. :) I wish I had your flair with words of wonder. This is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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The stars in the skies are heaven when touched, Melissa. You dress them in their heavenly beauty as they sparkle from your eyes. :) I wish I had your flair with words of wonder. This is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much, Jose, for your wonderful comments and review on this verse. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from PoemsOfDD
A good entry for the 3 line poem. Love the effect of the picture chosen for the ten words written. Crystalline gems on a sea of blue velvet - offers a beautiful visual to an inspiring scene. Well done on this strong entry for the competition.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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A good entry for the 3 line poem. Love the effect of the picture chosen for the ten words written. Crystalline gems on a sea of blue velvet - offers a beautiful visual to an inspiring scene. Well done on this strong entry for the competition.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Hi DD. Thanks so much for your wonderful words and affirmation on this verse. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
Such a delicately penned Haiku Melissa!
I am not a fan of initial caps for Haiku. But to each is own (-:
For me, 'flung' is descriptive, but would prefer another word to go with my feeling that is paired with your use of 'bedecked' and 'delicate.'
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Such a delicately penned Haiku Melissa!
I am not a fan of initial caps for Haiku. But to each is own (-:
For me, 'flung' is descriptive, but would prefer another word to go with my feeling that is paired with your use of 'bedecked' and 'delicate.'
Mark
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thanks Mark. So glad you liked it... I chose to capitalize Midnight because it was used as a proper noun... I know haiku is usually in lower case. I may change it. Thanks for the comments.
Melissa
