Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Bump"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from BethShelby
I hate to hear there are bumps ahead. The young guy seemed pretty nice. I hope he isn't one of the bumps. It is too bad the man of he house isn't happy about having a guest around. It sounds like his wife isn't letting him make all the decisions. I like your nature poetry.
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I hate to hear there are bumps ahead. The young guy seemed pretty nice. I hope he isn't one of the bumps. It is too bad the man of he house isn't happy about having a guest around. It sounds like his wife isn't letting him make all the decisions. I like your nature poetry.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you glad you like it! Thanks so much for reading as always. I appreciate your comments and your review and your fine writing too. Hope you have the best day Beth!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am enjoying the story line.
For the next few days, (For the following few days)
"Joo hear?" She asked. (she asked.)
I haven't more to give you." I said, (you,")
smiles." (omit quotation marks here.)
"She laughed,"Jess cheap." ("She laughed, "Jess cheap." )
Okay you stay, talk later." ("Okay)
Done noting dialogue in this)
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I am enjoying the story line.
For the next few days, (For the following few days)
"Joo hear?" She asked. (she asked.)
I haven't more to give you." I said, (you,")
smiles." (omit quotation marks here.)
"She laughed,"Jess cheap." ("She laughed, "Jess cheap." )
Okay you stay, talk later." ("Okay)
Done noting dialogue in this)
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Barbara so much appreciate you. I fear ratings and your kind comment and your suggestions for edit always valuable. Thanks again I hope you have a great day!