Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

very romantically sensual free verse about desire...
interesting word choices and smooth flow
i like the repetition - it works well

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Shelley

Thank you very much. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review (*=*)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

There seems to be a lot of these passionate style poems that have tried to apprehended the fiery passions of youth, which are dangerous to ideals, I think there tends to be a shift to the more even style apprehensions when older, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Roy,

Thank you very much. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review (*=*)

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 28-Nov-2023

Well done