Survives
a poem17 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I get the fast and strong/survives part, but the "converts what others don't" makes no sense to me. Must be I'm lacking a creative poet's heart and assessment of life or something.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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I get the fast and strong/survives part, but the "converts what others don't" makes no sense to me. Must be I'm lacking a creative poet's heart and assessment of life or something.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Go ahead, Rachelle. Get it off your chest and tell me off. I will admit what the other poem looked like, but when a poem is not promoted it will not do well. You will see I didn't move anywhere and that was never the point. I used the rest of the previous poem so as not to confuse anyone. Let's be friends so you won't need to think up snarky things to say.
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This isn't me "not being friends" with you or "getting anything off my chest." It was a genuine review. I didn't understand it. I'll tell you what: I'll take a hiatus from reviewing anything further of yours.
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I apologize, Rachelle. After reading a couple more reviews, I realized that this poem held a door open for interpretation that it shouldn't. Sorry for my knee-jerk reaction.
Comment from jim vecchio
I just converted some member dollars, but spent it already. Hope I survive on this site! In the meantime, I'll relax and let people like you demonstrate how easy it is to make a minimum of words into a meaningful message.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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I just converted some member dollars, but spent it already. Hope I survive on this site! In the meantime, I'll relax and let people like you demonstrate how easy it is to make a minimum of words into a meaningful message.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Jim
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I really will miss you!
Comment from Sally Law
Powerful little poem and illustration that emphasize the phrase: survival of the fittest. I'm working on that as I write this, summoning strength to finish the year strong.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for your writing day.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Powerful little poem and illustration that emphasize the phrase: survival of the fittest. I'm working on that as I write this, summoning strength to finish the year strong.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for your writing day.
Sal xo
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Sally
Comment from Michael Groover
This concise poem encapsulates a straightforward message about survival and adaptability. The poem's brevity and simplicity make its message clear and easy to understand. It emphasizes the importance of attributes like speed, strength, and adaptability in the context of survival.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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This concise poem encapsulates a straightforward message about survival and adaptability. The poem's brevity and simplicity make its message clear and easy to understand. It emphasizes the importance of attributes like speed, strength, and adaptability in the context of survival.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you. Michael
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Thank you
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being fast and strong and able to deflect and avoid danger does not always work, something will get us in the end. I enjoyed your provocative write Bill, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Being fast and strong and able to deflect and avoid danger does not always work, something will get us in the end. I enjoyed your provocative write Bill, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm not sure what this is referring to. The picture looks like Indiana Jones has been taken into custody in the background. Maybe the lady with dark glasses is the survivor. I think you like making us wonder.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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I'm not sure what this is referring to. The picture looks like Indiana Jones has been taken into custody in the background. Maybe the lady with dark glasses is the survivor. I think you like making us wonder.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Or ... maybe I just make it seem that way to affect a positive image of my sagacious brain.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm not sure what this is referring to. The picture looks like Indiana Jones has been taken into custody in the background. Maybe the lady with dark glasses is the survivor. I think you like making us wonder.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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I'm not sure what this is referring to. The picture looks like Indiana Jones has been taken into custody in the background. Maybe the lady with dark glasses is the survivor. I think you like making us wonder.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Or ... maybe I just make it seem that way to affect a positive image of my sagacious brain.