Losing Myself
To discover yourself, you must first lose yourself28 total reviews
Comment from karenina
It is just this raw, hardcore emotion that made me rush to buy your book, Charity!
I could cut my soul on your words, but I see the strong woman driving you forward.
I encourage everyone to contact you, and order "Life in The Trenches" -
"Poetic voice of the streets --
I'll quote you, from your "About the Author" page in the book:
"No matter what you are going through, you are not alone!"
I'm so blessed to have an autographed copy!
We need your voice!
Love you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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It is just this raw, hardcore emotion that made me rush to buy your book, Charity!
I could cut my soul on your words, but I see the strong woman driving you forward.
I encourage everyone to contact you, and order "Life in The Trenches" -
"Poetic voice of the streets --
I'll quote you, from your "About the Author" page in the book:
"No matter what you are going through, you are not alone!"
I'm so blessed to have an autographed copy!
We need your voice!
Love you!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thanks my dear friend. I'm glad you enjoyed the book and shared it with others. I will continue to be the voice until I take my last breath. I'll send you some clips of my performances to your email. I been so busy. I'm hosting a lot of event and always performing and writing.
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GREAT NEWS! YOU can be too busy to write any day as long as you're out there doing your thing!
Comment from godlucifer
i think our past is our misery. what we have become in our past is what have been hidden. by becoming our hidden past is by becoming our hidden happiness. your poem was excellent in its creativity. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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i think our past is our misery. what we have become in our past is what have been hidden. by becoming our hidden past is by becoming our hidden happiness. your poem was excellent in its creativity. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Very deep is this poem. Well constructed and good rhyming. Whilst I am not really into poems encapsulating depression, its many forms and the sad effects it has upon those who suffer from it, I kept reading. In any event well done. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Very deep is this poem. Well constructed and good rhyming. Whilst I am not really into poems encapsulating depression, its many forms and the sad effects it has upon those who suffer from it, I kept reading. In any event well done. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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I appreciate your review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This reads like a confessional poem of a person who wants to change. Has tried to change a few times, but has failed. Just because of a few failures doesn't mean you will always fail. One just needs to keep trying. YOU are worth it.
Drank in my cup, not wanting to leave. (Drink???)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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This reads like a confessional poem of a person who wants to change. Has tried to change a few times, but has failed. Just because of a few failures doesn't mean you will always fail. One just needs to keep trying. YOU are worth it.
Drank in my cup, not wanting to leave. (Drink???)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Drank is a slang term. I meant it the way it sounds lol. Thanks for your feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad post as it sounds like there is some regret in the past and how you have lived which has resulted in you being someone you do not recognise. We try and survive the trauma of life but it can change who we are, al poignant write Charity, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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This is a sad post as it sounds like there is some regret in the past and how you have lived which has resulted in you being someone you do not recognise. We try and survive the trauma of life but it can change who we are, al poignant write Charity, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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I appreciate your support and review. Happy New Year!
Comment from Tammie Swinehart
This poem is a weaver of emotions, that reflect the raw and unfiltered reality of the human psyche. I can see a vivid portrait of internal battles, capturing the turbulent storms within the soul. The verses resonate with authenticity, giving voice to the silent struggles that often go unnoticed. Well done and written. This speaks to some of my own past and present struggles. You will touch a lot of people with your words. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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This poem is a weaver of emotions, that reflect the raw and unfiltered reality of the human psyche. I can see a vivid portrait of internal battles, capturing the turbulent storms within the soul. The verses resonate with authenticity, giving voice to the silent struggles that often go unnoticed. Well done and written. This speaks to some of my own past and present struggles. You will touch a lot of people with your words. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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You are welcome. Thanks for the positive review.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Wow, this reads like a free-flowing stream of consciousness. If it came to you that way that would amazing. But even if you had to toil over each line the result is a soul-bearing, heart-wrenching, raw emotional ride. Exceptional writing. Terry.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Wow, this reads like a free-flowing stream of consciousness. If it came to you that way that would amazing. But even if you had to toil over each line the result is a soul-bearing, heart-wrenching, raw emotional ride. Exceptional writing. Terry.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the six stars!!
Comment from John Ciarmello
The turmoil in your life resonates through this piece and many others you've shared here on FS.
It sounds like you've backtracked a bit, but that doesn't mean it's over. I know you're persistent, and that's always the key that starts the engine. You've just hit the brakes too many times, Charity!! Put your foot on the gas, girl, and go. Never stop or look back! There ain't nothing there! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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The turmoil in your life resonates through this piece and many others you've shared here on FS.
It sounds like you've backtracked a bit, but that doesn't mean it's over. I know you're persistent, and that's always the key that starts the engine. You've just hit the brakes too many times, Charity!! Put your foot on the gas, girl, and go. Never stop or look back! There ain't nothing there! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you!! Happy New Year!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I know how you feel. I feel bad about what I have done with my life...the person I have turn out to be. Try to feel better about yourself... love yourself.... we are not failed ..... we have survived all the difficult experiences. Hang in there. Well expressed and well written.
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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I know how you feel. I feel bad about what I have done with my life...the person I have turn out to be. Try to feel better about yourself... love yourself.... we are not failed ..... we have survived all the difficult experiences. Hang in there. Well expressed and well written.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your review and good vibes.
Comment from lindafisher
Charity your poem is so dark and real. You have to have been there to be able to write about it with such conviction. It's powerful and thought provoking. Well written Charity.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Charity your poem is so dark and real. You have to have been there to be able to write about it with such conviction. It's powerful and thought provoking. Well written Charity.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. Happy New Year!
