Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The In-between "This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from BethShelby
Leaving that girl behind was certainly a victory for you. I am glad you told her off. I wonder how she ended up. Running her own brothal? So the house where you were told to leave and not return and where everyone had moved out happened when? I'm a little confused because now you saying you returned to the park where you met the homeless couple. I thought you met them after you had to run from the house people moved from. I really like the poem you have at the beginning of this. Also the one that won third about the mountain is really neat.
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Leaving that girl behind was certainly a victory for you. I am glad you told her off. I wonder how she ended up. Running her own brothal? So the house where you were told to leave and not return and where everyone had moved out happened when? I'm a little confused because now you saying you returned to the park where you met the homeless couple. I thought you met them after you had to run from the house people moved from. I really like the poem you have at the beginning of this. Also the one that won third about the mountain is really neat.
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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And they told me to leave and not come back. But the next day I went back and I saw him moving down there and some yellow tape on the driveway. Then I went to a friend around the corner or slept underneath her stairs which she tried to introduce me to a bad lifestyle. So I left and went to a local park. Not the woods per se but just to a park. So now this far in the book. I am attempting to find new shelter. One that I don't have to be afraid will be taken from me in short order. Thank you for your questions your curiosity and you know I enjoy. It's part of your charm! Thank you for your review and your great rating! Thanks again!